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[普通会员]
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我想有一个家
真的希望不要得到一些“善意” 的跟贴, 因为我是真心实意的在这里发这一张贴, 也经过了很长时间考虑要否。人在他乡,真的不容易。 我们应该可以互相鼓励一下吧?Life has been good to me. I am blessed with a happy and loving heart, a good figure, a nice job..... I live a healthy life style, I enjoy simple things that life can offer..walking, cooking, hiking, biking, reading, movies....I laugh at simple stuff, even myself. I am very independent and confident. I can take good care of myself . But I also know that two is better than one if the TWO match well. I would like to have a gentleman in my life who is nice, healthy,responsible and independent.
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Bluejade
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[开坛元勋]
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I enjoy fine things in life and always look for a thrill. Love sports, rock music, and whatever else that gives me a rush of adrenaline. As a well-educated, financially-secured male Chinese-Canadian... I am so blessed and excited to be able to share my soul and possiblly my heart with ... |
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[资深会员]
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There are varieties of ways to express the same thought due to the beauty of language. In the instant case, however, your suggestions could cause distortion of the accuracy of my original thoughts. For example, the expression "whatever else which will give" emcompasses and emphasizes any future activities. Further, the expression "the finer things" implies a narrow selection of the "fine things" that are enjoyed by everyone. And finally, the expression "am always looking" clearly provides the current status of mine. Any further discussion regarding the "wording" may be held to be impolite. |
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