if your writing is as good as hers, don't take it
最初由 Jeanne 发布
no, i took first class of this course during summer,i have already dropped it, and not planning to taking it. and my friends who was in the same class,who had her in winter term told me, that her class had only 7ppl passed, my friend herself dropped this course after midterm during winter term, and dropped again during summer term. 
no, i took (the) first class of this course (during在这里不能用， 因为take不是持续性动词) (this) summer,i have already dropped it, (and) not planning to taking (take)it (any more). and (one of) my friends who was in the same class,who had (done) her (in) winter term told me, that her class had only 7ppl passed (only 7 people had passed in her class), my friend herself dropped this course after the midterm (during)(in the) winter term, and dropped again (during)(in the) summer term.
3句话出了12个错，佩服！
最初由 Jeanne 发布
well, i think it's depend on Professor, as long you don;t get the Prof i had, i think you will do fine. However, generally speaking, that course has a heavy courseload, and mainly focus on writing,not report wrting, but essays!!! like narrative, description, ect, which most of us are not good at I strong think if this course is not a mandatory course for your guys,don;t take it, you will find it;s sometimes heavies and harder than your other regular business courses 
well, i think it('s) depend(s) on (the)Professor, as long (as)you don;t get the Prof i had (did), i think you will do fine. However(非转折关系应该用furthermore), generally speaking, that course has a heavy courseload, and mainly focus(es) on writing,not report wrting, but essays!!! like narrative(s), description, ect, which most of us are not good at
I strong(ly) think if this course is not a mandatory course (one) for you(r)guys,don;t take it, you will find it(;s) sometimes (应该放在句首或句尾)((heavies)heavier and harder than your other regular business courses
4句话只出了14个错, 大有进步!
这样的英文水平要能PASS，那真是活见鬼了，哈哈！
