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Breaking-up
这首歌的歌词我曾经发过

[music]http://members.rogers.com/huijiequ/breakingUP.mp3[/music]

歌词
people like you and i gotta face certain things in life, we can't always thrive, we can't always get high-fives. the thing that lasts is the memory, the story, it's all about the glory we have enjoyed back in the history. nobody knows what the ****'s going on with this world, romances are fold and unfold, promises are told and untold. i know, losing someone you love is the worst kinda stuff, but our destiny is decided just stand up and be tough.

一见钟情的浪漫和互相告别的遗憾,开始的阳光灿烂到最后的阴雨漫漫。 爱带来的麻醉换来了最后的憔悴, 对幸福的沉醉就像泡沫一样破碎。 爱是一个永远神秘的话题,其实爱与不爱之间只是一念之差的距离。一切一切都只是没有结果憧憬,无奈无奈只有酒能麻木现在的心情。有相聚就有分离这是千古不便的道理,忘掉过去不要让自己摧毁自己。但经过磨练的心只能更加的坚强,让我们鼓起勇气来面对人生的迷茫。

come on now stand up and be strong, life's gotta move on, listen to my song and let the pain tears be bygones. there are many more things in life for you to do, there is a shit load of expectations to live up to. breaking-up is hard it hurts deep in the heart, but only retartds gets trashed and you are smart. try to be yourself and try to be happy, let that experience you had live through infinity

如果听不了:http://members.rogers.com/huijiequ/breakingUP.mp3 呵呵
 
倒,这首也放出来~~~~~
 
最初由 Do@sInfinity 发布
能告诉我你用的原曲是谁唱的,叫什么名字吗?
什么原曲?既然是“我的rap”当然是我写的了。beat是网上的高手作的
 
唔唔。。。怎么说呢。。。中文部分感觉软。。向哈狗帮学习。。。硬点儿。。。。
 
不过还是送你俩字。。。。牛B。。。。
 
对,咬字重了些,不必追求别人听得懂,关键韵味流畅就好了。中文的部分要多努力~~ 加油啊 :cool:
 
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