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老大~~~~我们要30分钟至少~~~~~还不带看NOTE的
大姐阿
我们所有东西都要自己准备,连材料都是自己找俄
notes当然不准带得了
3分钟,这么多东西,会死人的
老师卡时间,多出来扣分,少了扣分,东西不够扣分
Hi everyone, my name is chen, and today I am here to make a presentation about my research.
my research topic is how relible or true is darwin's theory of evolution
and the thesis statement for this topic is
scientists have evidences to suportt that darwinism is sustainable. however, criticism of the
theory of evolution claim that although the theory is acceptable, it still has some weakness.
And the reason for why i picked such topic is because mainly i am really interested with this topic
and i believe most of us is also wondering about where are we really from. but the other thing is that
i can really easily to find many related resources so i won't get in trouble of finding entries.
right now i am still working on my research, and i have read 5 books, 4 journals and 1 review so far
and the most useful sources is a book that called basis of human evolution. that's pretty good book
that contains tons of useful figures of fossil and many scientis evidences that i could quote into
my final essay.
and the definition of evolution can be easily found in any dictionary which is a historical development
or changing process of a group of organism
now i will talking about my research essay, it will be seperated into 3 parts, which are the introduction
body and conclusion. the thesis of the essay, the definition and the outline of my body will be in the
introduction. the body of the essay will have 2 opposites parts, which are the negative and the positive side
of evolutionism. and in the conclusion i will make a more clear comments and deeper comparsion between
the negative and the positive side. and conclude it with a revised thesis statement.
And about the body section, I will divide it into two parts. The first one I will write about the negative
side of Evolutionism, mainly it’s about the discussion of what Darwin has missed. Some figures and tables
will be provided as evidences for my point. After a couple sentence, I will shift to the positive side of
Darwinism. With those fossil figures and useful tables, this part will be the main analyzing part of the essay.
And now i have targeted the next entry which are entry no.8, and hopely i can finish my first draft of the
final essay at next wedesday. and the second draft might be finished in 2 weeks later. i will try to finish
it in the deadline.
and thats all i want to say, thank you for your time and particpation.