CFC最新公司形象宣传页

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"Founded in July 2000, Comefromchina.com(CFC) is the most popular web service provider serving the biggest number of registered users and attracts the largest volume of daily visits among all Chinese websites in Canada’s Capital region. "

知道文中把attracts和is并列,但觉得还是改作attracting比较好,和serving并列,服务着,吸引着,一家之言;)
 
随便举个例子,这样的问题里面很多。例如,new immigrants came from China,应该是 new immigrants coming from China.


为了我们共同的美好家园,重写吧。:D

agree with "coming"
 
the most effective in reaching target customers

target 没错,但是 targeted 是不是更好?
 
你要是不想重写俺们就帮你找。


its wide coverage, highly efficient in marketing communication

its wide coverage, high efficiency in marketing communication
 
你要是不想重写俺们就帮你找。


its wide coverage, highly efficient in marketing communication

its wide coverage, high efficiency in marketing communication

effectiveness is better
 
给我100w 我给你从写一遍。



About Us

Comefromchina.com (CFC) was established in July 2000. Canada's capital, the largest number of registered users, daily visits, the most famous Chinese website. The company owns CFC Forum four business units of the Yellow Pages of CFC, the CFC Encyclopedia, as well as the CFC social networking to the capital region of nearly 100,000 registered users, more than 1,000 business units, and the majority of students and new immigrants, the focus of news, community forums , corporate advertising, the Chinese Yellow Pages, as well as community events organization services.



CFC online advertising by many business users recognized as having a wide coverage, and put in high efficiency, market positioning accuracy of these three characteristics. First, as the capital of the region's premier Chinese network, CFC is the major source of information for the vast majority of Chinese in the region of Ottawa. Secondly, the forum, yellow pages, Wikipedia and other business units for the different needs of different users to provide targeted information services and user interaction function. Advertisers can choose based on product characteristics and market demand corresponds to the layout and user groups to advertise. In addition, CFC 2010 online advertising 24/7/365 24x7 delivery of unique advantages.



Twelve years, the CFC 2010 along with many CFC advertisers common growth. Collaborative, interactive and win-win is our faith. CFC Chinese network is your bridge to success.


Undo edits
 
In short, it offers the best “value-for-money” services for advertisers.

最好的,就木有复数了。把这个“s“去掉吧!
 
服务加拿大渥太华华人社区12年

Serving the Ottawa Chinese community since 2000
 
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