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This tragedy leaves the widow two young children and two elders, who are the widow's parents and living in the same house.

This tragic event leaves behind a widow, two young children, and two elderly parents of the widow who live in Ottawa.

Mr. Liu was survived by his wife, two young children, and parents-in-laws, who also live in Ottawa (OR who live in the same house).

 

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This tragic event leaves behind a widow, two young children, and two elderly parents of the widow who live in Ottawa.

Mr. Liu was survived by his wife, two young children, and parents-in-laws, who also live in Ottawa (OR who live in the same house).

用survived by的话，那还得加上北京的父母呢。

 

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用survived by的话，那还得加上北京的父母呢。

Agreed.

我是就文字改文字。

 

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用survived by的话，那还得加上北京的父母呢。

感觉他北京的父母被忽略了。

 

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不敢想。
独生子。不知道老人多大年纪、身体怎么样；老人能过来看儿子最后一眼么。

 

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不敢想。
独生子。不知道老人多大年纪、身体怎么样；老人能过来看儿子最后一眼么。

觉得是 65 岁左右

 

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觉得是 65 岁左右

那样，如果老人想过来的话，还得同中国大使馆和加拿大外交部联系，请他们协调以便老人能及时过来。