哪位大能人帮咱看看…

[Melody]

介教授写的啥？娃说写的太花看不懂，明天就due了，急的捉耳挠腮哩！[emoji29][emoji29]

 

[一亩三分地]

介教授写的啥？娃说写的太花看不懂，明天就due了，急的捉耳挠腮哩！[emoji29][emoji29]

This is an interesting topic that can potentially lead to an interesting and insightful essay. You seem to have a fairly clear idea about the direction and structure of the essay.
As you develop your in-depth analysis and individual scenes, keep working on rejoining your thesis. What exactly do you mean by "the awakening". Be specific. Similarly, "poor choice & flow elements" sounds too general consider something like "The emphasis on dialogue and the flow evaluates the value of the male characters and weakers the female characters" This is just an example of the level of specifically in the thesis, The content of the argument will, of course, be your own.

 

[Melody]

狗子，你那blahblah正是我娃也看不出的东东[emoji21][emoji21]

 

[ivytree]

我的解读如下，肯定有出入，但是大概意思能看明白

This is an interesting topic that can potentially lead to an interesting and insightful essay. You seem to have a fairly clear idea about the direction and structure of the essay. As you develop your in-depth analysis of individual scenes, keep working on reframing your results. What exactly do you mean by "true awakeurs"? Be specific. Similarly, "poor choice of film elements" sounds too general . Consider something like "The emphasis on dialogue in the film enhances the role of the male characters and weakens the female characters" (This is just an example of the level of specificity in the results. The content of the argument will, of course, be your own.

 

[ljyj]

狗子，你那blahblah正是我娃也看不出的东东[emoji21][emoji21]

upcoming year theis??

 

[ccc]

狗子，你那blahblah正是我娃也看不出的东东[emoji21][emoji21]

the fist one is "true awakening".

 

[一亩三分地]

狗子，你那blahblah正是我娃也看不出的东东[emoji21][emoji21]

大概改了一下不保对

 

[ccc]

我的解读如下，肯定有出入，但是大概意思能看明白

This is an interesting topic that can potentially lead to an interesting and insightful essay. You seem to have a fairly clear idea about the direction and structure of the essay. As you develop your in-depth analysis of individual scenes, keep working on reframing your results. What exactly do you mean by "true awakeurs"? Be specific. Similarly, "poor choice of film elements" sounds too general . Consider something like "The emphasis on dialogue in the film enhances the role of the male characters and weakens the female characters" (This is just an example of the level of specificity in the results. The content of the argument will, of course, be your own.

"true awakening".

 

[Melody]

我的解读如下，肯定有出入，但是大概意思能看明白

This is an interesting topic that can potentially lead to an interesting and insightful essay. You seem to have a fairly clear idea about the direction and structure of the essay. As you develop your in-depth analysis of individual scenes, keep working on reframing your results. What exactly do you mean by "true awakeurs"? Be specific. Similarly, "poor choice of film elements" sounds too general . Consider something like "The emphasis on dialogue in the film enhances the role of the male characters and weakens the female characters" (This is just an example of the level of specificity in the results. The content of the argument will, of course, be your own.

谢谢，回头转发给娃.[emoji846]

 

[Melody]

大概改了一下不保对

狗子哥辛苦！

 

[ivytree]

谢谢，回头转发给娃.[emoji846]

是不容易 这字儿写得

 

[rctli]

this is an interesting topic that can potentially lead to an interesting and insightful essay. you seem to have a fairly clear idea about the direction and structure of the essay. as you develop your in depth analysis of individual scenes, keep working on refining your thesis. what exactly do you mean by "true awakening"? be specific. similarly, "poor choice of film elements" sounds too general consider something like "the emphasis on dialogue in the film enhances the role of the male charactor and weakens the female charactor." this is just an example of the level of specificity(?) in the thesis, the content of the argument will, of course, be your own.
* 粗体字为看了狗子的post后，做的更正。
hope it helps.

 

[ccc]

狗子哥辛苦！

引号内应该是你孩子的proposal里面的原话，让她想想自己吹什么了。

如果还是词不达意，就根据自己的辨认和理解，把教授的话敲下来，然后通过电子邮件发给教授，请教是否是教授想要说的话。

下次那教授就不会写天书了。

 

[Melody]

this is an interesting topic that can potentially lead to an interesting and insightful essay. you seem to have a fairly clear idea about the direction and structure of the essay. as you develop your in depth analysis of individual scenes, keep working on refining your thesis. what exactly do you mean by "true awakening"? be specific. similarly, "poor cl~? of ~? elements (有两个词不清楚，但这引号内是引自你孩子的，你孩子应该知道)" sounds too general consider something like "the emphasis on dialogue in the ~? enhances the role of the male charactor and weakens the female charactor." this is just an example of the level of specificity(?) in the thesis, the content of the argument will, of course, be your own.

hope it helps.

谢谢！

 

[ccc]

谢谢！

让小东西看看。

她如果搞清楚了，请把教授的批示贴这里，我们学习学习。