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by Wei Chen
2003-11-17
我自己觉得还是老三段好用
开头
[总体概括一下你要写什么，从文中来点资料（改写完句子再用上去）]
主体
[分2，3点，割几段，各段写不同的内容，不过中间要有几个句子联系起来。
不要用I think, in my opinion,CAEL不吃托福那一套，要用传说中的Academical一点，要用别人的思路就来句according to,refer to
比如说我写中加是个什么样的学校
我分开3段写body
1. tuition fee [学费很高]
连接： Tuition fee is a big difference when we talk about CCSC. Moreover we also have a different education system compare with other senior high school in China.
2. education [2国教育]
连接：With the help from such great education system, the student body in CCSC is also showing its impressive influence to every individual on the campus.
3. student body[学生]
结尾
[总体概括一下你写了什么，再来点感受]
一样要求不要用I think, in my opinion,CAEL不吃托福那一套，要用传说中的Academical一点
实在没料写的话，从文章中抄点素材，不过要记得改写，抄也是有技巧的
by Wei Chen
2003-11-17
我自己觉得还是老三段好用
开头
[总体概括一下你要写什么，从文中来点资料（改写完句子再用上去）]
主体
[分2，3点，割几段，各段写不同的内容，不过中间要有几个句子联系起来。
不要用I think, in my opinion,CAEL不吃托福那一套，要用传说中的Academical一点，要用别人的思路就来句according to,refer to
比如说我写中加是个什么样的学校
我分开3段写body
1. tuition fee [学费很高]
连接： Tuition fee is a big difference when we talk about CCSC. Moreover we also have a different education system compare with other senior high school in China.
2. education [2国教育]
连接：With the help from such great education system, the student body in CCSC is also showing its impressive influence to every individual on the campus.
3. student body[学生]
结尾
[总体概括一下你写了什么，再来点感受]
一样要求不要用I think, in my opinion,CAEL不吃托福那一套，要用传说中的Academical一点
实在没料写的话，从文章中抄点素材，不过要记得改写，抄也是有技巧的
