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Oh Well...

在我刚开始写rap的时候,写的东西都不值一看,大家都说写的不像rap,像打油诗。我后来开始一边听beat一边写,这样写出来的东西就像样了。"oh well"是我写的第一个rap,当时不懂用音频软件,就是用windows录音机录的,当时如果出一点毛病就得重新录。花了我不少时间。我写的主要是我对社会的看法。

[music]http://members.rogers.com/huijiequ/oh_well.mp3[/music]

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not every single thing we do is meaningful, our moods are unstable, are thoughts are lethal, even adults, they do things that are hateful, people like to be devils not heros. there is a part of us that makes us pitiful, we want to be powerful, just like criminals, people like pistols, screw gun control, what are we? we are just animals.

many people say that we are not a perfect race, if that's case we are born to make mistakes, what's the concequence with coughing in someone's face, or talking a little too loud in a public place? my parents call those tiny shit signs of disgrace, why the **** do they care about every mistake i make? we are the new generation with a totally different taste, watch pornography if you wanna keep up the pace

look at those little boys and girls who do drugs, they say "hey yo watch out man we are thugz". they walk around with their tattoos and think that shit's cool, **** you! what you gonna do if you don't finish highschool? some ppl worked in macdonald's all their lives, they were thugz before now they sit and cry. they spent 30 something yeares behind the ****ing counter, and guess what they are making 7 bucks an hour! it's your life go ahead and risk it, if you think life is a game go ahead and play it, life goes on no matter if you capture or waste it, whatever the result is you are the one to taste it.

again, 如果你听不了就:http://members.rogers.com/huijiequ/oh_well.mp3 :D
 
恩~我觉得第三段最好
因为有感情的起伏,前面的词压韵,不过好象没感情在里面
不过满厉害了,我现在更坚定决心要把我的做好
 
不错,这里能人真不少呀! :cool:
 
我想写点关于种族的词,不知道是否有兴趣合作?
 
最初由 齐天大圣 发布
恩~我觉得第三段最好
因为有感情的起伏,前面的词压韵,不过好象没感情在里面
不过满厉害了,我现在更坚定决心要把我的做好
被你看出来了,前面两段我只是为了rhyme,到最后一段有感觉了。
 
最初由 齐天大圣 发布
我想写点关于种族的词,不知道是否有兴趣合作?
什么是种族的词?我当然有兴趣了
 
怎么讲呢,想中立的讲华人在国外受到一定不平等态度的外界因素和自我因素
 
最初由 齐天大圣 发布
怎么讲呢,想中立的讲华人在国外受到一定不平等态度的外界因素和自我因素
好题材:cool: 很有兴趣,这是个大家都很有共鸣的主题
 
最初由 齐天大圣 发布
怎么讲呢,想中立的讲华人在国外受到一定不平等态度的外界因素和自我因素

我喜欢!我有感触
 
最初由 大漠张三 发布


我喜欢!我有感触


慢点我们可以先把这个主题的想法和我们有过类似的遭遇交流下
然后大家都来说说身边碰到的或者听到的或感受到的事,可以是老外无理取闹,也可以是的确有些华人兄弟姐妹们自身问题,然后我们从中取材,再写词,找BEATZ,你们觉得怎么样
 
好啊,中文还是英文还是混杂着一起来?
 
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