神州加乡身是客,征下联[分享]

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上联:神州加乡身是客
下联:故土北美网为媒

征更好下联和横披。
 
Why do you think you 是客 ?

Canada or US, this is YOUR country. China is NOT your country, it is where you were born and raised, and (perhaps) where most of your relative still lived.

This is equivalent to the following senario:

You happened to work for Nortel in your very first job, then later on moved to Cisco, and continue to tell Cisco co-workers that your identity and hearts are with Nortel forever, and you are just a guest at Cisco...


最初由 James 发布
上联:神州加乡身是客
下联:故土北美网为媒

征更好下联和横披。
 
对不起,我是中国公民。也许以后会是加拿大公民,但现在是中国公民。而且,我的心确实在中国。
 
上联:神州家乡身是客
下联:四海飘流情不移
 
Re: Why do you think you 是客 ?

最初由 Xiaomimi 发布
Canada or US, this is YOUR country. China is NOT your country, it is where you were born and raised, and (perhaps) where most of your relative still lived.

This is equivalent to the following senario:

You happened to work for Nortel in your very first job, then later on moved to Cisco, and continue to tell Cisco co-workers that your identity and hearts are with Nortel forever, and you are just a guest at Cisco...



联不敢对,但Xiaomimi提出了一个很有趣的问题: 怎么定义"祖国"。

如果"祖国"专指个人的"出生国家",那么一个"外国人"如果在中国出生,那怕他第二天离开中国,他这一生的"祖国"都将是中国。

如果"祖国"是指父辈的"出生国家",那么可能就更乱了。我的祖国可能便成了"楚国",因为我父亲的"祖国"是指他父亲的"出生国家",如此追溯。

还有一种定义,"祖国"是指十八岁以前居住的国家,这就更不容易界定了。
 
Sorry I jumped the gun

Should realize many in this forum are still Chinese citizen. A Chinese citizen can of course continue to consider China as their country.

What about a Chinese citizen with Canada or US PR ? I think this is a gray area. I know in US a green card holder must register for Army recruit and be ready to pick arm for America, against thier birth country if necessary.



最初由 James 发布
对不起,我是中国公民。也许以后会是加拿大公民,但现在是中国公民。而且,我的心确实在中国。
 
最初由 zhangzhiwu 发布
上联:神州家乡身是客
下联:四海飘流情不移

“漂流”是动词,不可以对名词“加乡”;另外,“漂流”的发声是平平,“加乡”的发声也是平平,应该找到仄仄发声才可以。同样,“不移”不可以对“是客”。

谢谢。
 
藏龙卧虎之地啊!?
 
最初由 James 发布
上联:神州加乡身是客
下联:故土北美网为媒

征更好下联和横披。

不会对,只会改,故国枫土网为媒,或者,故国枫土谁为先。

好象平仄对不上。算了。
 
您这个 "平平平平平仄仄" 的上联也有待再推敲推敲吧, 如此平仄好像使上联失去了读音韵律上的美感, 这可是对联艺术极重要的方面.
五字联倒是经常有 "平平平仄仄", 但七字也这样就不太好了.
 
也就这水平了,将就吧。不过这也是考人对对子的水平的。自我感觉很难。
 
Re: Re: 神州加乡身是客,征下联[分享]

最初由 wind 发布


不会对,只会改,故国枫土网为媒,或者,故国枫土谁为先。

好象平仄对不上。算了。

谢谢。

“国”是平声,不对。“先”是形容词,不能对“客”。
 
最初由 James 发布
也就这水平了,将就吧。不过这也是考人对对子的水平的。自我感觉很难。

下联只需要 2, 4, 6 分明, 尾字平收即可. 您的下联是 "仄仄仄仄仄平平", 可以考虑把1,3,5字改改, 还可以带回来.

我可是对不出的.
 
最初由 neverever 发布


下联只需要 2, 4, 6 分明, 尾字平收即可. 您的下联是 "仄仄仄仄仄平平", 可以考虑把1,3,5字改改, 还可以带回来.

我可是对不出的.

阁下的意思是把“故”,“北”,“网”改掉?
 
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