原创音乐 - Lights Out

[缺口]

昨天参加了一个朋友的葬礼， 想起了去年写的一首歌，谢谢欣赏。

作曲，编曲， 配器， 吉他及迷笛编程， 混缩： 缺口
词 ： EDWARD THOMAS （19世纪英文诗，公共领域，无版权问题）

https://soundcloud.com/quekou/lights-out

Lights Out

I have come to the borders of sleep,
The unfathomable deep
Forest where all must lose
Their way, however straight,
Or winding, soon or late;
They cannot choose.

Many a road and track
That, since the dawn’s first crack,
Up to the forest brink,
Deceived the travellers,
Suddenly now blurs,
And in they sink.

There is not any book
Or face of dearest look
That I would not turn from now
To go into the unknown
I must enter, and leave, alone,
I know not how

 

[让我拥抱你]

昨天参加了一个朋友的葬礼， 想起了去年写的一首歌，谢谢欣赏。

作曲，编曲， 配器， 吉他及迷笛编程， 混缩： 缺口
词 ： EDWARD THOMAS （19世纪英文诗，公共领域，无版权问题）

https://soundcloud.com/quekou/lights-out

Lights Out

I have come to the borders of sleep,
The unfathomable deep
Forest where all must lose
Their way, however straight,
Or winding, soon or late;
They cannot choose.

Many a road and track
That, since the dawn’s first crack,
Up to the forest brink,
Deceived the travellers,
Suddenly now blurs,
And in they sink.

There is not any book
Or face of dearest look
That I would not turn from now
To go into the unknown
I must enter, and leave, alone,
I know not how

中午吃饭的时候听了一遍，很不错啊，乐曲悠扬，女声嗓音也好，很好听。

 

[腊八粥]

似曾相识的曲风，好听。但是歌词和旋律的情绪并不一致，如果不是刻意制造反差，建议换个男低音来唱。

 

[XCYM]

不错的缺口！各个环节都不错。

 

[缺口]

中午吃饭的时候听了一遍，很不错啊，乐曲悠扬，女声嗓音也好，很好听。

似曾相识的曲风，好听。但是歌词和旋律的情绪并不一致，如果不是刻意制造反差，建议换个男低音来唱。

不错的缺口！各个环节都不错。

[emoji1] 谢谢各位欣赏 [emoji111]