请各位大虾帮我看看这份electronics technician的简历有什么问题！

[Cadence]

最近在网上看到两个中介（manpower,addeco)发的召electronics technician的广告，他的职位要求和我的经验非常吻合，可简历发过去，一点消息也没有，大家帮我看看是简历有什么问题吗？
另外，对这种中介发的广告，是不是上门去登记一下更好？谢谢！

name
address
telephone
Email


OBJECTIVE
Seeking a technician position in the area of Electronics Engineering

HIGHLIGHTS
- Six years’ experience working as an electronics technician
- Extensive knowledge and experience with computer-assisted design systems, such as ConceptHDL, Allegro and Protel
- Familiarity with regular test equipment, such as Oscilloscope, Function Generator and Multimeters
- Ability to conduct analysis and solve problems
- Can work well as part of a team

EXPERIENCE
ABC company, China
Electronics Technician 1997 ? 2003

Duties:
- Tested prototypes of new products and evaluating their performance prior to introducing them to manufacturing
- Responsible for coordinated transfer of new products from R&D to manufacturing
- Inspected and tested printed circuit boards and assemblies
- Diagnosed and located circuit and component faults
- Adjusted or replaced electronic components
- Operated environmental test equipments
- Collected and analyzed test data
- Produced written reports on test results

EDUCATION
XYZ Institute of Technology, China, 1993 - 1996
College Diploma, Electronics Engineering

 

[Kent以东首帅哥]

No canadian experience

 

[Cadence]

那帅哥的意思是我的简历本身没有大问题喽？
我知道我没有canadian experience,可怎样才能弥补这个缺陷呢？

 

[Kent以东首帅哥]

No canadian experience is the main problem

The resume itself has a few minor grammatical problems.

For instance, "tested XXX and evaulating XXXX" and "Function Generator and Multimeters" are both wrong as parallel structures.

Manpower won't take walkins unless they mentioned that in ads. They would ask you to wait for their calls.

 

[Cadence]

多谢指教！
第一处错误是我的疏忽，因为原来用的动词都是ing，后来觉得这是以前的工作职责，所以就改成过去时，没想到漏改了一处；
funtional generator我指的是那种用来产生各种频率各种波形的仪器，multimeter我指的是万用表，不对吗？或者您的意思是他们不应和示波器并列？
另外，我准备把简历中的china去掉，不知能不能蒙到中介的面试！

 

[Kent以东首帅哥]

They are inconsistent on plural forms.

 

[Caohaoying]

This is a typical resume. You can expect the HR to receive thousands of
these resumes per day. You cannot stand out based on this resume. No special
impression is made. No interest to see the person after reading the resume.

 

[ht123]

how can I stand out?

 

[vision]

最初由 Cadence 发布
最近在网上看到两个中介（manpower,addeco)发的召electronics technician的广告，他的职位要求和我的经验非常吻合，可简历发过去，一点消息也没有，大家帮我看看是简历有什么问题吗？
另外，对这种中介发的广告，是不是上门去登记一下更好？谢谢！

name
address
telephone
Email


OBJECTIVE
Seeking a technician position in the area of Electronics Engineering

HIGHLIGHTS
- Six years’ experience working as an electronics technician
- Extensive knowledge and experience with computer-assisted design systems, such as ConceptHDL, Allegro and Protel
- Familiarity with regular test equipment, such as Oscilloscope, Function Generator and Multimeters
- Ability to conduct analysis and solve problems
- Can work well as part of a team

EXPERIENCE
ABC company, China
Electronics Technician 1997 ? 2003

Duties:
- Tested prototypes of new products and evaluating their performance prior to introducing them to manufacturing
- Responsible for coordinated transfer of new products from R&D to manufacturing
- Inspected and tested printed circuit boards and assemblies
- Diagnosed and located circuit and component faults
- Adjusted or replaced electronic components
- Operated environmental test equipments
- Collected and analyzed test data
- Produced written reports on test results

EDUCATION
XYZ Institute of Technology, China, 1993 - 1996
College Diploma, Electronics Engineering

Here is an adv.on electronic assembler:
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Wish you good luck!

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Advertisement number: 884293
Title: Electronics equipment assembler (electro-optical assembly) (NOC: 9483)
Terms of Employment: Permanent, Full Time, Overtime, Day
Salary: $11.00 to $13.00 Hourly for 40 hours per week
Anticipated Start Date: As soon as possible
Location: St Laurent and Walkley, Ontario (2 vacancies)
Skill Requirements:
Education: Not required
Experience: 1 - 2 years
Languages: Speak English, Read English, Write English
Area of Specialization: Assembly, Inspection, Testing
Type of Work Experience: Hands-on assembly or fabrication, Microscope
Type of Product Specialization: Subassemblies
Type of Inspection or Testing Specialization: Finished products, Subassemblies
Specific Skills: Assemble microcircuits requiring fine hand assembly, the use of microscopes and adherence to cleanroom procedures, Check final assembly for finish, labelling and packaging methods
Additional Skills: Collect, record and summarize inspection results
Essential Skills: Reading text, Oral communication, Working with others, Computer use

Employer: Lumenera Corporation

How to Apply: By Mail:

2470 Don Reid Drive
Ottawa, Ontario
K1H 1E1


In Person between 9:00 and 17:00:

2470 Don Reid Drive
Ottawa, Ontario
K1H 1E1


By Fax: (613) 736-4071
By E-mail: jobsp1@lumenera.com

Business Profile: Manufacturer of digital imaging cameras. We have several standard products and we specialize in custom manufacturing.
Web Site: www.lumenera.com
Advertised until: 2004/07/30


This job advertisement has been provided by an employer external to HRDC. HRDC is not responsible for the accuracy, the currency and the reliability of the content.

 

[Kent以东首帅哥]

Probably too many people applying for these kind of low level works which almost everyone can do.

 

[dropinto]

最初由 Cadence 发布
最近在网上看到两个中介（manpower,addeco)发的召electronics technician的广告，他的职位要求和我的经验非常吻合，可简历发过去，一点消息也没有，大家帮我看看是简历有什么问题吗？
另外，对这种中介发的广告，是不是上门去登记一下更好？谢谢！

name
address
telephone
Email


OBJECTIVE
Seeking a technician position in the area of Electronics Engineering

HIGHLIGHTS
- Six years’ experience working as an electronics technician
- Extensive knowledge and experience with computer-assisted design systems, such as ConceptHDL, Allegro and Protel
- Familiarity with regular test equipment, such as Oscilloscope, Function Generator and Multimeters
- Ability to conduct analysis and solve problems
- Can work well as part of a team

too weak

- Familiarity with regular test equipment, such as Oscilloscope, Function Generator and Multimeters

Solid regular test equipment, such as Oscilloscope, Function Generator and Multimeters

- Ability to conduct analysis and solve problems

Strong ability to conduct analysis and solve problems

- Can work well as part of a team

Excellent team player

 

[SOSSOS]

最初由 Kent以东首帅哥 发布
Probably too many people applying for these kind of low level works which almost everyone can do.

Any advice then?:blink:

 

[waterll]

i feel that your resume is short,like ad.you should extend your work experience.giving them examples which you did in China.

 

[小C]

可以做自雇.如果有本钱的话.或者给我干,如果我有本钱的话.