本人略涉词联，拙填水调歌头一厥，以寄对新生活之厚望。

[海外游子]

本人略涉词联，拙填水调歌头一厥，以寄对新生活之厚望。

花街轻歌罢，柳巷又曼舞；秦楼求酒未酣，楚馆复看茶．灯红酒绿醉生，纸碎金迷梦死，明朝醒何家？镜花水月，更南柯一枕．

酒共醉，影成双，梦长随。沧海曾经，巫山除却并逍遥！曲径空天阔海，湖畔妙语轻言，晓风驱残月。霜红枫胜火，茫然谁与共?

今早闲来无事，漫游 Gatineau Park，先行 Pink Lake，再走 Plein Air Trail, 偶得短联，抛砖引玉．

水清喜见鱼群舞；山静悦闻鸟聚歌．

 

[jackywyy]

nice poem

 

[badboy88]

looking for Miss wrong..

 

[海外游子]

up

 

[我亦有亭]

对联不对人：
水清喜见鱼群舞
风过欣知菡萏香

秋凉方叹韵华短
山静悦闻鸟聚歌

 

[我亦有亭]

再来，和你词一首，


万水方涉罢，复与尘沙舞，花前共影同酣，唤清风看茶。静聆天籁渐生，笑看虚名尽死，此处即我家。捧星拥月，借南山一枕。
人自醉，景无双，禅音随，西天取经，路途亦并非遥遥。只身飘洋过海，心底犹自戏言：渺暮雪冷月，历春雷烈火，南极北斗共

 

[海外游子]

Good poem but we are talking about different things and definitely feel very differently. I appreciate your talents and would like to know you. Maybe we can get together some time to talk more about poetry.

 

[我亦有亭]

呵呵，路过，码字玩玩，我手述我心，如是而已。差别大也是因为所思所想相异吧，试再和你词一阙。

灞桥折柳罢，杨花漫天舞，离愁伴雨正酣，窗前把冷茶。陋檐荒草丛生，深闺兰竹尽死，游子不归家。薄雾晓月，怜夜夜空枕。

欲长醉，梦成双，魂相随。诸子五经，添香伴读何逍遥，转眼桑田沧海，肠寸断人无言，恨无知满月，清辉戏烽火，不与相思共。

 

[海外游子]

偶得一词，在此奉上。如能得到修字改词，不胜感激；博得一笑不亦乐乎。

沁园春 --- 股市书怀

凝视屏幕，纳指狂跌，道指猛泻。瞧满盘红遍，惊心动魄：安龙（1）方毙, 世通（2）又现，司徒（3）进监，北电（4）报假，万魅华街（5）竞神通。茫股海，问芸芸圣手，谁主浮沉？

股市多姿如画，令几多豪杰尽神往。叹彼得林奇（6），晚节不保，乔治索罗（7），偃旗息鼓，神中之神，华伦巴菲（8），三年豪产减五成。俱往矣，数风流人物，尚待来年。

(1) --- ENRON
(2) --- WORLD COMM
(3) --- MATHA STEWARD
(4) --- NORTEL
(5) --- WALL STREET
(6) --- PETER LYNCH
(7) --- GEORGE SOROS
(8) --- WARREN BUFFET.

 

[joyce6]

I appreciate your literary talents very much!
Is your major literature ? So nice to read your poems!

















QUOTE]最初由 我亦有亭 发布
















呵呵，路过，码字玩玩，我手述我心，如是而已。差别大也是因为所思所想相异吧，试再和你词一阙。

灞桥折柳罢，杨花漫天舞，离愁伴雨正酣，窗前把冷茶。陋檐荒草丛生，深闺兰竹尽死，游子不归家。薄雾晓月，怜夜夜空枕。

欲长醉，梦成双，魂相随。诸子五经，添香伴读何逍遥，转眼桑田沧海，肠寸断人无言，恨无知满月，清辉戏烽火，不与相思共。 [/QUOTE]

 

[我亦有亭]

最初由 joyce6 发布
I appreciate your literary talents very much!
Is your major literature ? So nice to read your poems!

thx 4 Ur appreciation, literature is one of my interesting, I always regret that it is not my major, but now I think playing words games is not bad, have fun!