刚刚栽rolia上看到的,转贴过来给你参考,个人认为写得有些太罗嗦
邀请信
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by richjohn (Dou Ni Wan'er) at 2005.4.20 11:19
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我的邀请信,保持了我的一贯认熊(song)的风格,写得比较罗索,同时也比较个人化。当然我觉得如果其他条件都非常符合的情况下,一句话的邀请信应该也可以。所以还是应该先评估自己的个人情况,然后通过提供额外的材料进行修补;或者个人情况比较或者非常良好,完全按照使馆要求准备也行。一个没有边界条件的题解是没有任何意义的。
非常感谢坛子里其他朋友的无私分享。
第一段:
1 被邀请人姓名,与邀请人关系
2 期望他们到来的时间和停留时间
Dear Visa Officer:
I am writing this letter to support my parents, Mrs. xxx and Mr. xxx, to apply for their temporary visitor visas to Canada. I'd like to invite my parents to visit my family in Canada for about one and half month ideally starting from June 7th 2005.
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第二段:
来加主要目的:参加我的毕业典礼
My mother is a retired xxx engineer and my father is still working as a xxx professor for xxx. They devoted most of their time to the company and it was almost their life-long regret to miss my convocation ceremony in xxx when I graduated with a Bachelor of Engineering degree. So the main purpose of the visit is to attend my convocation ceremony held in xxx University on xxx 2005, when I will receive Master of xxx degree from this top Canadian business school. I would like invite them to share this glorious moment with me and my wife.
第三段:
其他目的:旅游及旅游计划
At the same time, I also would like them to share with me and my wife the best season of Canada. I plan to show them around the famous cities like Ottawa, Montreal, Quebec city, PEI and Halifax, the same travelling route I took in May 2003. I also plan to drive them down to Niagara Fall and join several wine tours in the St. Catherine areas, where I have spent almost one year with another xxx MBA students to work with a local wineries in an xxx strategic field study project in xxx. Of course, as my parents mentioned to me many times, we will take this opportunity to show our respects to Dr. Norman Bethune’s former residence in Gravenhurst, Ontario, who is best known in China for his work as a field surgeon with the Eight Route Army from 1937-1939.
第四段: < r o l i a. n e t >
其他目的:购物为国内亲戚朋友购买礼物
顺带说明我和我太太的雇佣情况:因为我们全职工作,所以不能陪他们购物
再顺着说明“在加拿大停留期间谁付钱“。我刚工作,工资还可以,但是没我父母有钱。所以他们自己付钱。
My Parents are currently working on a shopping plan for the gifts to their relatives in China. However, because both my wife and I are working full time, they’ve got to do it on their own. Currently, my wife is working as xxx for XXX. I, even before the official graduation in xxx 2005, have already started working as a xxx, Ontario for xxx since xxx 2005 in charge of the company’s business development in Ontario. As a result, we are in a solid financial situation to support my parent’s one and half month visit. However, my parents will, as they proposed, be responsible for all their local expenses including food, housing, travelling within Canada, medical insurance, and their round trip tickets by themselves. They will stay with us at the above address.
第五段:
保证他们会按时回去。同时呼应父母的“不移民声明”。
I will make sure that my parents will leave Canada before the expiration of their authorized stay. My father also wrote you a statement that they do not intend to immigrant to Canada for your reference, which, I believe, is strong and persuasive.
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结尾
It would be a great honour of my parents and my family if you can kindly grant them a Temporary Visitor Visa. Should you have any concerns, please do not hesitate to contact the undersigned. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours truly,
xxx
B.Eng, xxx Candidate 2005
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