Flower Xterra vs. GangW

[Xterra]

Sorry for this offensive title. I just wanted to get attention from GangW and every other DXs.

I have liked GangW's flower shots (not just this area obviously, there are so many to learn from, but this post is a studing post for flower.) The one really gets me I post it below.

My favorit GangW's work (flower Macro)

 

[Xterra]

And here comes mine own, after a close study.

Let me know if it even came close, photography wise, and what part of this photo you guys dislike.

Thanks in advance!

exif:
Shooting Mode
Manual Exposure
Tv( Shutter Speed )
1/640
Av( Aperture Value )
5.0
Metering Mode
Evaluative Metering
ISO Speed
100
Lens
70.0 - 200.0mm
Focal Length
140.0mm

 

[Xterra]

original, no editing at all, just resized.

 

[阿瓜]

I think it's a good cropping.

 

[Xterra]

最初由 阿瓜 发布
I think it's a good cropping.

Thanks 阿瓜!

Is there anything can be improved? I try to present more details of this flower itself. but I see no enough contrast inside of the flower. I think the boring light may play a critical role to this issue.