hmmm, thanks for sharing!
besides "夏天晚上出去摄影一定要穿长衣长裤啊", I reall hope you can learn more from this photo.
here are my opinion:
1> you got the tone right. I really like the color tone of your photo. It contribute to the feel that you tried to achive.
2a> "我从山东来" was right, you need foreground.
2b> If you have no foreground, I would rather like the horizon to be at 2/3 of the frame, so there would be more sky, and the city and trees to be in the center of the frame. looks more balanced.
3> you need to work on the lights. they are too many of them, and the bridge lights ruined this photo.
You don't have to agree with me though.
Thanks for sharing again!