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杨戬

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夏天晚上出去摄影一定要穿长衣长裤啊:(
 
一平如镜

静谧.:cool:
老感觉少了一点前景.
 
hmmm, thanks for sharing!

besides "夏天晚上出去摄影一定要穿长衣长裤啊", I reall hope you can learn more from this photo. :)

here are my opinion:
1> you got the tone right. I really like the color tone of your photo. It contribute to the feel that you tried to achive.
2a> "我从山东来" was right, you need foreground.
2b> If you have no foreground, I would rather like the horizon to be at 2/3 of the frame, so there would be more sky, and the city and trees to be in the center of the frame. looks more balanced.
3> you need to work on the lights. they are too many of them, and the bridge lights ruined this photo.

You don't have to agree with me though. :D

Thanks for sharing again!
 
谢谢两位指点!
一直以来拍片都是大平面图,以后会多多尝试和学习运用前景
Xterra:看了你的第三点建议,才觉得确实桥灯有些不协调呵呵
 
great composition :cool: I agree with Xterra about the lights though.
 
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