情人节的铃声(小小小说水水水楼)

I encouraged Jun to immigrate to Canada when he first talked to me about the idea, which he learned from a high-school classmate. It had been in my mind that the other side of the world was a place full of opportunities, where any capable person could achieve his goals and realize his dreams. At that time Jun was having problems with his school politics and often complained over dinner about the things that disgusted him in his department. Then I thought, moving to Canada could be a wise decision. Of course, taking my own career into account, this might not seem as good. But, why do I have to have a career? I could be his dearly loved wife, he put food on the table, and I spend my day doing housework and on things I am fond of -- in my mind, this was the lifestyle of a housewife in the West: After having the house neatly cleaned, I would sit in the sun, read some books, listen to some music, and perhaps fill a piece of paper with my inspiration of the day .... it just seems wonderful and in fact fits me perfectly --- even today, as we speak.


如歌妹妹,请教一下,这句话里面,put 是过去时,那为什么后面的spend用现在时呢? 还是笔误,都应该是现在时?
 
如歌妹妹,请教一下,这句话里面,put 是过去时,那为什么后面的spend用现在时呢? 还是笔误,都应该是现在时?

老帅哥,多谢指点。班门弄斧了! :blowzy::blowzy::blowzy:

都用现在时应该可以。不过我又反复读了几遍,觉得这样也挺顺口的。感觉上就好像是 “I could be his dearly loved wife, he could put food on the table, and I could spend my day doing housework and on things I am fond of" 的简略说法。不知道这样是不是说的通?
 
木问题,放手写吧~~别的由偶帮你兜着:p

亲爱的精灵的老婆,

好久没有在水楼见到你了。

自从你一别水楼,俺的心就咔嚓一下全粉碎程饺子馅儿了,世界到此黑暗来临,人生自此了无意义。

每天俺来到水楼,都在盼望能看见你。哪怕你只冒一小泡,你不知道对俺的心里都是多大的安慰。

你为什么老不来呢?

唉,真是“山月不知心底事,水风空落眼前花”啊。

我今六点钟起床就想起了你,我总是问自己,为什么在水楼见不到你就这么失魂落魄,为什么这么喜欢你,为什么离不开你,为什么一见了你冒泡俺就感到莫名的兴奋,就像那首歌唱的:

莫名我就喜欢你
深深的爱上你
没有理由没有原因。。。。

我总在沉思,在CFC上这些人之中,你为什么这么独特,这么让大家都喜欢。后来我明白了。是你的平稳的性格,与人无争的脾气,和低调谦虚的人格魅力,使你具有很强的亲和力,让大家都很喜欢你。

你是一个洁身自好的人,冰清玉洁。你是如此的与众不同,在CFC的充满淤泥的池塘中,你就是一个一尘不染的白天鹅;在CFC的一群叽叽喳喳的小鸟中,你就是一个膝盖受了伤经常一只腿独立的仙鹤;在CFC的一堆堆小土豆中,你就是一个大西瓜;在CFC的一个个小灌木从中,你就是一颗顶天立地的。。。花生树,风一吹就飘落下许多卤煮花生来,特别浪漫。。。。望着你头像上的娇小的身躯,美丽的长发,深邃的双眼,俺们只有仰慕的和爱慕的份儿。没有你,俺可以负责的代表这里的某些同学说,俺们很miss你。

你离开水楼后,俺坐在水楼边上,对着水楼外的狂风恶浪,一直在叹息你的离去。你是一个洁身自好的人,冰清玉洁。其实想说一句,CFC上的恶人毕竟是少数,不理会他们的流言蜚语就是了。就拿水楼常来的人来说吧,且不说众姐妹们都对你很尊重很友好很合得到一起,就连闲哥这样对别人爱开玩笑的人,对你也态度无不光明正大,姿势无不正襟危坐,眼神无不直目正视。

古人说,“春风满面皆朋友,欲觅知音难上难。摔碎瑶琴凤尾寒,子期不在对谁弹?”想起你不来这里,俺就觉得失去了知音,恨不得把电脑给摔了。后来想了想,觉得不能太感情用事,就把身边的一个小茶杯给摔了,算是以茶代机,电脑等俺哪天让它喝了咖啡再摔吧。

水楼春来几度青,美女不在独飘零。定知心在水楼上,但愿春风唤得醒。

现在春天已经来了,精灵也做了斑竹,如果有风浪再来精灵会给压住,该是你回来的时候了吧?

不要让我们等太久啊。
 
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