Re: if your writing is as good as hers, don't take it
您是英文老师吗?您在这儿卖弄什么呢?您的水平一定很高吧?象您这样学贯中西的人才来这里的论坛挑别人的错太浪费了吧?有这样的时间和本事,满可以赚上三五十块酒钱嘛。这里很多人(当然您老除外)没这闲工夫咬文嚼字,字斟句酌的掉文。不过我看以后是没人敢开口说话了。怕您给这儿挑错的工夫,耽误了您糊口的大事。求您了,赶紧回去赚工分吧!

您是英文老师吗?您在这儿卖弄什么呢?您的水平一定很高吧?象您这样学贯中西的人才来这里的论坛挑别人的错太浪费了吧?有这样的时间和本事,满可以赚上三五十块酒钱嘛。这里很多人(当然您老除外)没这闲工夫咬文嚼字,字斟句酌的掉文。不过我看以后是没人敢开口说话了。怕您给这儿挑错的工夫,耽误了您糊口的大事。求您了,赶紧回去赚工分吧!
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no, i took (the) first class of this course (during在这里不能用, 因为take不是持续性动词) (this) summer,i have already dropped it, (and) not planning to taking (take)it (any more). and (one of) my friends who was in the same class,who had (done) her (in) winter term told me, that her class had only 7ppl passed (only 7 people had passed in her class), my friend herself dropped this course after the midterm (during)(in the) winter term, and dropped again (during)(in the) summer term.
3句话出了12个错,佩服!
well, i think it('s) depend(s) on (the)Professor, as long (as)you don;t get the Prof i had (did), i think you will do fine. However(非转折关系应该用furthermore), generally speaking, that course has a heavy courseload, and mainly focus(es) on writing,not report wrting, but essays!!! like narrative(s), description, ect, which most of us are not good atI strong(ly) think if this course is not a mandatory course (one) for you(r)guys,don;t take it, you will find it(;s) sometimes (应该放在句首或句尾)((heavies)heavier and harder than your other regular business courses
4句话只出了14个错, 大有进步!
这样的英文水平要能PASS,那真是活见鬼了,哈哈!
