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同是9年级的时候写的情书，看看两位文笔的不同，大家评价一下吧:lol:
转 文 武:
Haven't met a girl like you hitherto, and you are the lady who's beloved by me.
Your amiable temperament and lovely countenance are the temptations for me.
Always think that i have met you somewhere, and your face seems to be familiar.
Oh, I suddenly remember that I have met you in my fancy dreams.
Oh, I suddenly remember that I have met you in my fancy dreams.
When the night has come and my bed becomes lonely with the darkness.
I cant help myself and eventually drift into the solitude of dream.
Sometimes soon after, however, i couldnt even remember with some hints.
We finally met each other again, in the solitude of dreams, in the solitude of dreams.
I always imagined that I did have th honor to live with you in an idyllic place somewhere on this planet.
But my brain coudltn give any further imaginations for me to taste the finale of happiness.
I finally cried by and by, I was so pathetic that I gradually couldnt even cry.
Dont you even sympathize such a gentlman who loves you and alive.
If you really dont, just forget everything with the wave of time.
I beg your love with my glowing heart.
And mine is the one without any tart.
If you accpept my love and desire, please give me an answer soon.
Or you coudl just leave my enthusiams back on the remote moon......
转J. Luo (这个是我亲眼所见，比他送给的女孩看到的早12小时 - 对象是中国人。他放学放到人家locker里，我打羽毛球前去她locker里拿东西，看到一张小小纸条。。。就是J. Luo的情书了。。蹩脚的字体＋破破烂烂一张纸。。吐血n升。我locker就在人家对面，第二天早上看她反映。。寒一个)
To 某某 (我就不说是谁了)
如果你是鲜花，
我就是小草，
陪伴你左右。
可是你是鲜花么？
不是，所以我也不是小草。
如果你是月亮，
我就是星星，
陪伴你左右。
可是你是月亮么，
不是，所以我也不是星星。
如果一年前我就认识你，
我现在一定是你的男友。
可是我一年前认识你么，
不，所以我现在也不是你的男友。
给我一个机会，
希望我们能互相认识。
我喜欢你。
J.Luo 签名。
记忆有出入，所以后面一点有可能有一点不太一样。大体没有错误。发誓没有丑化也没有美化。
我吐血。。。
转 文 武:
Haven't met a girl like you hitherto, and you are the lady who's beloved by me.
Your amiable temperament and lovely countenance are the temptations for me.
Always think that i have met you somewhere, and your face seems to be familiar.
Oh, I suddenly remember that I have met you in my fancy dreams.
Oh, I suddenly remember that I have met you in my fancy dreams.
When the night has come and my bed becomes lonely with the darkness.
I cant help myself and eventually drift into the solitude of dream.
Sometimes soon after, however, i couldnt even remember with some hints.
We finally met each other again, in the solitude of dreams, in the solitude of dreams.
I always imagined that I did have th honor to live with you in an idyllic place somewhere on this planet.
But my brain coudltn give any further imaginations for me to taste the finale of happiness.
I finally cried by and by, I was so pathetic that I gradually couldnt even cry.
Dont you even sympathize such a gentlman who loves you and alive.
If you really dont, just forget everything with the wave of time.
I beg your love with my glowing heart.
And mine is the one without any tart.
If you accpept my love and desire, please give me an answer soon.
Or you coudl just leave my enthusiams back on the remote moon......
转J. Luo (这个是我亲眼所见，比他送给的女孩看到的早12小时 - 对象是中国人。他放学放到人家locker里，我打羽毛球前去她locker里拿东西，看到一张小小纸条。。。就是J. Luo的情书了。。蹩脚的字体＋破破烂烂一张纸。。吐血n升。我locker就在人家对面，第二天早上看她反映。。寒一个)
To 某某 (我就不说是谁了)
如果你是鲜花，
我就是小草，
陪伴你左右。
可是你是鲜花么？
不是，所以我也不是小草。
如果你是月亮，
我就是星星，
陪伴你左右。
可是你是月亮么，
不是，所以我也不是星星。
如果一年前我就认识你，
我现在一定是你的男友。
可是我一年前认识你么，
不，所以我现在也不是你的男友。
给我一个机会，
希望我们能互相认识。
我喜欢你。
J.Luo 签名。
记忆有出入，所以后面一点有可能有一点不太一样。大体没有错误。发誓没有丑化也没有美化。
我吐血。。。
