写给痛失爱子的父母们

枫都书叟

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Uncles and aunties:

I am a complete stranger to you but what I am saying to you is from the bottom of my heart.

This is absolutely not the way any of us want you to visit Ottawa. I am extremely sorry for your unspeakable and unrecoverable loss and my condolence, sympathy and thoughts are with you! This is our heavy loss too --- our community lost two young precious members! Ottawa is getting very cold and I am not sure if you are used to this weather. Have you brought with you enough warm clothing? Further, everything is completely new to you. We are all Chinese. Don't be shy to ask around for help whenever you are in need. Please save your grievances (jie ai) and take great care (bo zhong)! There will be many things in the days ahead that will require your time and energy to handle. Justice will be served. We are fully behind you in these proceedings! The best way to mourn is to keep in good health and spirit!
 
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建议把“你们”换成“您们”。可能有点绕口,但是尊称。

一点建议,希望楼主不介意。

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