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iam a newcomer,i send my resume for two weeks,but there is not
any reply,i think something wrong with my resume,could you give
me a succsessful resume which had got interview chance.
tkanks lot.
 
The job market sucks, it's very normal for you sending resumes without any feedback thereafter.

If you don't mind, hide sensitive information then post your resume here, see if somebody can give you valuable suggestions.
 
两个星期?!两个月能有个消息就不错了,发出去的简历95%以上都是石沉大海!别急,继续努力!!

Good Luck!
 
更正,4个月,99。99%
 
advice for resume

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CAREER OBJECTIVE: Software Designer
SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS
- More than 12 years experience in software design and development.
- More than 6 year's experience in RDBMS (Oracle, DBMS),UNIX,WINDOWS
- More than 5 years experience in C++/C, Pascal (Delphi) and OO
- More than 3 years experience in JAVA (J2EE,J2SE).
PROFESSIONNAL KNOWLEDGE AND SKILLS
Operating systems: Unix(SOLARIS, Linux, openVMS), Windows NT/2000/98
Programming Language: J2EE(JMS,EJB,JSP,Servlets,JNDI,JDBC), J2SE, UML,
CORBA, jprobe,C++/C, Assemble, Basic, Pascal(Delphi).
Jbuilder. JAVA2 Certified .
Databases: Oracle8I Certified Professional DBA, Ms SQL Server.
Web: TCP/IP, CGI, HTML, SOAP, XML,WEBLOGIC
- Strong skills on J2EE,J2SE,ORACLE
- Well experience of team working.
- Strong problem solving skills
- Good communication skills
WORK EXPERINCE
Sept.1996-present Developer, Project Designer
Hainan Dayou computer Company (Subsidiary of HTB)
- Recently took part in HTB call center project (OLTP), in charge of web part, write design document and complete more than 10,000 code lines, include C++(IP Telephony),
EJB,JSP,JAVASCRIPT,HTML,JAVABEAN,APPLET,XML , write ORACLE8I PL/SQL
procedure deployment JSP,EJB,JAVABEAN to WEBLOGIC6.1,ORACLE8I and
WEBLOGIC6.1 on SOLARIS.
- Took part in constructing of www.hk.hi.cn www.hq.cninfo.net (Tianya Online)
Internet website, supervised programmers on application code and offered
technical support simultaneously wrote html pages with Dreamweaver used Oracle
on SOLARIS.
- Completed independently the proving of technical feasibility of the project of
- Haikou Public Information Point and developed Demo software by C language.
- developed billing system by Oracle and C++ language(include C) .
July.1990-Aug.1996 Programmer, Developer
Computer center (Branch of HTB)
- Took part in construction of Telephone Number Inquiry System for HTB, analyzed
the needs, built up data flow prototype, made DBMS model program frames, coded
notices, produced its database, wrote complex program code of inter-face between
ORACLE database and communication control program with assemble , tested
system, and trained users.
- Took part in research and development of Computer Management Information
System(MIS) Of HTB, analyzed the needs, built up sub-system data flow
prototype, made DBMS model program frames with database language Oracle on
Open-VMS platform, coded interface programs with assemble language.
- Developed the software according to my algorithm on Windows platform with
Foxpro language for analyzing and forecasting Haikou telecommunication market.
Education
Jun. 1986 - Jun. 1990
Chongqing University of Post and Telecommunication
Degree: bachelor major: computer&communication
 
1. HTB -- What's that? Nobody here can tell.
2. Too many "took part in", that's not a good phrase to describe your expertise and experience. You'd better use "design", "implement", "analyse", "accomplish" etc. You have to write the specific "part" you take in detail instead of using vague words.

My $0.02
 
<quote>
- Took part in construction of Telephone Number Inquiry System for HTB, analyzed
the needs, built up data flow prototype, made DBMS model program frames, coded
notices, produced its database, wrote complex program code of inter-face between
ORACLE database and communication control program with assemble , tested
system, and trained users
</quote>

Yours -- my $0.02 to make it looks better
"analyzed the needs" -- user requirements;
"made DBMS model program frames" -- data modeling?
"produced its database" -- build database from scratch;
"coded notices" -- what is notices? is it "ticket"?
"inter-face" -- interface, no dash;
"tested system" -- conducted unit test, blahblahblah.

总体感觉用词不太地道,能明白你说什么,但是这边不是这么说的.到OTT.JOBS上看看,有人在上面贴简历,体会一下用词差别.
 
给你点建议:

1) 建立有用的提,没用的不提,针对不同公司有不同版本,现在谁还有VMS
2) 强调经验,别老MORE THAN,几年啊?C++多了去了,要应聘什么样子的单位就强调一下对方的需求,比如强调MC VC++ NN年经验
3) 工作履历,太流水,没个工作单位你负责的事情,重点是你所作过的项目的描述,要假设对方都是白痴,讲细点,这里面的重点就是你做的那部分,强调NNN行代码没什么意思,要说你干的什么,用什么工具,用在哪儿了。中间涉及到哪些硬件软件。最好是国际知名的。
4) 培训,有什么写什么

先这么多吧,请总桶及各位指教 :blowzy:
 
骂我 :blowzy::blowzy::blowzy:
 
秃子贼着呢!哪肯把它的玉全抖出来?建议请秃子撮饭,这样可知更多.
 
斑竹 ott.jobs的全称 谢谢!!! 谢谢各位

最初由 VeryIratedPerson 发布
<quote>
- Took part in construction of Telephone Number Inquiry System for HTB, analyzed
the needs, built up data flow prototype, made DBMS model program frames, coded
notices, produced its database, wrote complex program code of inter-face between
ORACLE database and communication control program with assemble , tested
system, and trained users
</quote>

Yours -- my $0.02 to make it looks better
"analyzed the needs" -- user requirements;
"made DBMS model program frames" -- data modeling?
"produced its database" -- build database from scratch;
"coded notices" -- what is notices? is it "ticket"?
"inter-face" -- interface, no dash;
"tested system" -- conducted unit test, blahblahblah.

总体感觉用词不太地道,能明白你说什么,但是这边不是这么说的.到OTT.JOBS上看看,有人在上面贴简历,体会一下用词差别.
 
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