CFC最新公司形象宣传页

[扣 扣]

整体看着挺上等的～～:blowzy:

 

[dkwan]

Onlinw platform serves Ottawa Chinese Community for 12 years.

 

[ccc]

有复议的么？

Better!

 

[西迈]

文字俺不懂，图片谁做的？:blowzy: 咋像四海一家的帐单夹呢？:blowzy: 靠，还有插信用卡的地方。能不能再请小鸭给弄得精致点？倒倒角什么的？ 加点曲线？你介个有点像奔驰车的外形，平板中带点骨感，能不能往老魏家的奥迪上靠靠？

 

[Riven]

文字俺不懂，图片谁做的？:blowzy: 咋像四海一家的帐单夹呢？:blowzy: 靠，还有插信用卡的地方。能不能再请小鸭给弄得精致点？倒倒角什么的？ 加点曲线？你介个有点像奔驰车的外形，平板中带点骨感，能不能往老魏家的奥迪上靠靠？

你就知道吃

 

[Riven]

Better!

你说的是下面这个？
CFC tailors its information services and offers interactive function to address a variety of users’ needs through its four business units. As such, businesses can select CFC advertising channels to effectively approach potential customers based on target market demand and to maximize return.

needs of a variety of users.

targeted.

 

[ccc]

这文字是越读越不顺。

 

[小 篆]

文字俺不懂，图片谁做的？:blowzy: 咋像四海一家的帐单夹呢？:blowzy: 靠，还有插信用卡的地方。能不能再请小鸭给弄得精致点？倒倒角什么的？ 加点曲线？你介个有点像奔驰车的外形，平板中带点骨感，能不能往老魏家的奥迪上靠靠？

附议附议。

 

[ccc]

你说的是下面这个？
CFC tailors its information services and offers interactive function to address a variety of users’ needs through its four business units. As such, businesses can select CFC advertising channels to effectively approach potential customers based on target market demand and to maximize return.

needs of a variety of users.

targeted.

This:

CFC has been the primary information source for the majority of Chinese users in the Capital Region for almost a decade.


CFC has been the primary source of information to the majority of Chinese users in the Capital Region for a decade.

... primary source of information to the majority of Chinese users in the Capital Region for a decade.

 

[西迈]

呵呵，我喜欢热闹。 从小傻那赚得50万正好来个千金散尽。

Y输给你50万？:blink: 又玩欧饮啦？ 一个赌博诈骗犯罪集团作案的线路清晰了，有给筹款的，有设局的，有收钱的，还有撒钱的。。。

 

[三句半]

你说的是下面这个？
CFC tailors its information services and offers interactive function to address a variety of users’ needs through its four business units. As such, businesses can select CFC advertising channels to effectively approach potential customers based on target market demand and to maximize return.

needs of a variety of users.

targeted.

CFC tailors its information services and offers interactive function to address a variety of users’ needs through its four business units. As such, businesses can select CFC advertising channels to effectively approach potential customers based on target market demand and to maximize return.

也许是这个意思。

CFC tailors its information services and offers interactive function to address needs of a variety of users through its four business units. As such, businesses can select CFC advertising channels to effectively approach potential customers based on targeting market demand and maximizing ROI.

 

[Smallworld]

“CFC bridges you from start to success.”

CFC is the bridge to success 成吗？

 

[Riven]

CFC tailors its information services and offers interactive function to address a variety of users’ needs through its four business units. As such, businesses can select CFC advertising channels to effectively approach potential customers based on target market demand and to maximize return.

也许是这个意思。

CFC tailors its information services and offers interactive function to address needs of a variety of users through its four business units. As such, businesses can select CFC advertising channels to effectively approach potential customers based on targeting market demand and maximizing ROI.

1 万

 

[Riven]

问题有的.

先说一个, 这个 "THE" 用的不是地方.
建议删去.



CFC is the your best choice of online advertising to target Chinese communities in Ottawa.

有复议的么

 

[三句半]

好多句子整体上读起来别扭，更改一两处还是不能改变表达的整体风格。


建议让荞麦或懒猫重新起草。