CFC最新公司形象宣传页

[Riven]

好， 找错就到这里，暂时能用就行了。

从长计议。

各位辛苦了。

 

[西迈]

同意。靠小改不成，这文字必须打回去重来。

老大就是显摆赢钱了， 有两总版主一英一法的不用。用王朔的话说，喜欢拿一沓一沓的CFC刀地把人抽死。

 

[往事如歌]

Good, Who else?

new immigrants coming from China has the intonation that you refer to those who are coming from china. Unless you really mean that, I would simply say, new immigrants from China.

介个point能得1w吗？ 要是有劳务费，姐晚上再给你挑挑毛病。

 

[9981]

夹一些chinglish也很有味道的。我觉得意思表达清楚就可以了。

 

[Riven]

new immigrants coming from China has the intonation that you refer to those who are coming from china. Unless you really mean that, I would simply say, new immigrants from China.

介个point能得1w吗？ 要是有劳务费，姐晚上再给你挑挑毛病。

好， 先前挑得给1万
挑毛病活动已经结束。

 

[往事如歌]

简单改一两个地方不行。要是我说就介样：

For more than ten years, CFC has been growing up together with our business clients. Our mission is to bring win-win solutions to our customers with collaborations, interactions, and cooperation.

me no like this "with"

 

[ccc]

new immigrants coming from China has the intonation that you refer to those who are coming from china. Unless you really mean that, I would simply say, new immigrants from China.

介个point能得1w吗？ 要是有劳务费，姐晚上再给你挑挑毛病。

好建议。

说：and hundreds of thousands of international students and immigrants from Asia.

 

[往事如歌]

好， 先前挑得给1万
挑毛病活动已经结束。

xie xie la 那偶歇七拉

 

[sarah liu]

Comefromchina.com(CFC) is the largest among all Chinese websites in Capital Region

介个有人砸过木有? 把among all 去掉。
Comefromchina.com(CFC) is the largest Chinese website in Capital Region

"website in Capital Region" does not make much sense for me. So I prefer this:

CFC (www.comefromchina.com) is the most popular online community for Chinese in Capital Region.

 

[苦逼热狗]

Riven咱真心别用google翻译了，坑人耐千刀的万意儿啊

 

[枪在手]

老枪，你还真别劝老大。
你看我就睃了一眼，找了个漏掉的字母，那天被你骗走的1万刀就又回来了，真的是“千金散尽还复来”，一散一复来的还得了许多乐子，这不是好得很吗？

另外，自打我被你骗后，又有两人给我送钱，俺又小有积蓄了，准备存着等你下次来骗啊。

老枪筹资从来都光明正大，何来骗一说？顶多算是忽悠！

你去看看小傻的腰包就会发现老枪是取之于民（有时也取之于官）用之于赌滴！

 

[枪在手]

呵呵，我喜欢热闹。 从小傻那赚得50万正好来个千金散尽。

给我留点儿！

 

[三句半]

既然是形象宣传，Mission 和 Social Responsibility 这两项也许有必要加上去。

 

[heureux]

就出去开了会，错过了这么好玩的东东

 

[forxp]

There is one more imporvement

这个句子不通顺，像是中式英语：
CFC online advertising has long been recognized by many local advertisers with respect to its wide coverage, highly efficient in marketing communication as well as the most effective in reaching target customers.

if something is recognized by someone with respect to....should followed by 名词或动名词。我建议改成：

CFC online advertising has long been recognized by many local advertisers with respect to its wide coverage, high efficiency in marketing communication as well as its effectiveness of reaching target customers.