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- 主题发起人 cheerup
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A ceremony of grown-ups
men and women
love making
A ceremony of life
a seed to a fruit
taste differs
A ceremony of death
a tombstone on the top
bones deep in
A ceremony of rainbow
seven colors in a curve
out of reach
A ceremony of poetry
laughs and tears
endless
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A ceremony of grown-ups
men and women
love making
A ceremony of life
a seed to a fruit
taste differs
A ceremony of death
a tombstone on the top
bones deep in
A ceremony of rainbow
seven colors in a curve
out of reach
A ceremony of poetry
laughs and tears
endless
大师，顶礼膜拜呀。 正琢磨cheerup 的诗怎么解读呢，，，
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心有所感， 就匆匆地记下， 就三句小学生诗， 那有什么奇思妙想. This will be my meditation poem. A life of ceremony.
这破诗是几无哩头， 但想象空间很大， 能量正或负(又正又负可以吗?)， ceremony指什么， 各人感受不同， 看年纪经历观点宗教背景等等。
青草mm真是高人， 她的诗一早答了,ceremony怎么解渎也可以
呵呵， 我玩儿深沉， 她也看出， 佩服
那你到底深不深沉？ 初读你这几句正是周日，想着是不是刚从什么典礼宴席归来，乘兴装摸做样滴感慨一番。
一出生，有婴儿礼(天主教的点水礼)，中间有毕业，成年，结婚，离婚，就职，离任等礼，直至葬礼，，，
但若楼主深沉，超凡脱俗，上述这些有形的礼仪／典礼／仪式也许就不屑一提，那么无形的会是什么捏？？？
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那你到底深不深沉？ 初读你这几句正是周日，想着是不是刚从什么典礼宴席归来，乘兴装摸做样滴感慨一番。
一出生，有婴儿礼(天主教的点水礼)，中间有毕业，成年，结婚，离婚，就职，离任等礼，直至葬礼，，，
但若楼主深沉，超凡脱俗，上述这些有形的礼仪／典礼／仪式也许就不屑一提，那么无形的会是什么捏？？？
A poem for Atla——queen of questions
When a poem speaks
Dudu
When a poem speaks
A dictionary is not a must
The only ruler is your heart
To measure definitions and doubts
Pain and gain, right or wrong
Past and present, black or white
When a poem speaks
A question is an answer
One word on screen
Two behind, maybe three, or four
Even ten, a hundred, a million
On the way, invisible
When a poem speaks
Still life becomes animated
Animated thoughts frozen
In a line, or in a word
Unbreakable beauty
Sits between lines
Your heart is the solution
To decode the empty space
If a poem can talk
Let it talk his own dialect
If a poem can sing
Let it sing her own notes
If a poem willing to answer
It already has its own mark
A cross, a check or a blank
When you dig too deep
Can you see trees, grass and flowers,
Houses, people, and dogs around?
In the hole you digged
Can you feel the breeze, the sun
The mist, the color surround?
Be simple
The hardest language to learn
To tell the truth
Stay on the surface
Is the best way
To see more, and
Feel more
Hehe, good luck! Atla
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A poem for Atla——queen of questions
When a poem speaks
Dudu
When a poem speaks
A dictionary is not a must
The only ruler is your heart
To measure definitions and doubts
Pain and gain, right or wrong
Past and present, black or white
When a poem speaks
A question is an answer
One word on screen
Two behind, maybe three, or four
Even ten, a hundred, a million
On the way, invisible
When a poem speaks
Still life becomes animated
Animated thoughts frozen
In a line, or in a word
Unbreakable beauty
Sits between lines
Your heart is the solution
To decode the empty space
If a poem can talk
Let it talk his own dialect
If a poem can sing
Let it sing her own notes
If a poem willing to answer
It already has its own mark
A cross, a check or a blank
When you dig too deep
Can you see trees, grass and flowers,
Houses, people, and dogs around?
In the hole you digged
Can you feel the breeze, the sun
The mist, the color surround?
Be simple
The hardest language to learn
To tell the truth
Stay on the surface
Is the best way
To see more, and
Feel more
Hehe, good luck! Atla
哦，青草地，谢谢点拨。
好湿啊，淋漓尽致啊，，，我现在有点棘手的事， 晚上吧，，，在cfc就学了一个事儿 －－－ 较真儿，晚上练习一下
