小包子的作文：My Dream House

[头发短见识长]

你儿子说不定是第二个李嘉诚

 

[CCL]

你儿子说不定是第二个李嘉诚

哈，李嘉诚第二？承你吉言，不过 这个是真正day dream了，他就是前段时候陪我们到处转悠看房子，看着看着就瞎想了而已，呵呵。。。

 

[erichenry]

这娃真是很懂享受，他不知道我床上用品的价格，但他最喜欢的一定是最贵的最舒服的，而且特别特别喜欢massage. 为了骗我给他massage,经常从学校回来跟我装受伤呀累呀痛呀什么的，这小子有腐败的potential.

小孩呀小孩 ，真是父母的缩小版呀，我儿也特别会享受，吃个坚果最喜欢松籽，哪受个小伤马上来KISS FOR BETTER,小孩呀
你们那现在白天最高气温能多少度呀？我们东边这一下雨气温就回暖，今天都11度了，温暖得像春天一样，今冬还没下过雪呢

 

[ID Search Fail]

有个那么有想法的包子多好啊

 

[CCL]

小孩呀小孩 ，真是父母的缩小版呀，我儿也特别会享受，吃个坚果最喜欢松籽，哪受个小伤马上来KISS FOR BETTER,小孩呀
你们那现在白天最高气温能多少度呀？我们东边这一下雨气温就回暖，今天都11度了，温暖得像春天一样，今冬还没下过雪呢

现在的孩子都比较贼，会耍小花招邀宠，呵呵。。。

我们今天跟你们气温差不多，不热也不太冷的，我走路接小包子回家，拉着他的小脏爪子边走边聊，感觉挺美好，呵呵。。。

 

[她二大爷]

这个小孩儿的豪宅要求地面以上5层高，我找了一晚上也没找到，能看到类似的都是老欧洲那里几百年老宅。

 

[enst]

这么小就知道在意房子面积了 呵

 

[uglyducking]

A 30-million-dollar house，肯定深宅大院啊，还怕在主路上么。

整个主路都是他家的

 

[rainbosun]

无聊翻了翻小包子的作文本，看了他写的 My dream house. 全文无分段，看着很累，不过内容有些意思，觉得这个年龄的娃娃，半懂不懂的，有限的想象力着实搞笑，希望他美梦成真，不过最好房子别真的在一条very very very big street. 咋想的哈，豪宅建主干道上，干脆建主高速上好了，土娃，呵呵。。。

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小包子的水平，相当于我们当年link 三年级A的水平，真是长江后浪推前浪，青出于蓝，而胜于蓝！

 

[snowbean]

看这字，你这儿子将来是个人物。 没看到拼写错误，更没有语法错误。

几年级啊，词汇量还不小。

are you sure?
should a or an before elevator?
single t or double t in atic?

 

[uglyducking]

are you sure?
should a or an before elevator?
single t or double t in atic?

看過英語是怎麼進化的那篇文章麼？

 

[snowbean]

看過英語是怎麼進化的那篇文章麼？

no

 

[uglyducking]

看過英語是怎麼進化的那篇文章麼？

Directors at Opel and GM USA have announced an agreement to adopt English as the preferred language for communications, rather than German, which was another possibility.
As part of the negotiations, directors at GM conceded that English spelling has some room for improvement and have accepted a five-year phase-in plan.
In the first year, "s" will be used instead of the soft "c". Also, the hard "c" will be replased with "k". Not only will this klear up konfusion, but komputers have one less letter.
There will be growing kompany enthusiasm in the sekond year when the troublesome "ph" will be replased by "f". This will make words like "fotograf" 20 persent shorter.
In the third year, akseptanse of the new spelling kan be expekted to reash the stage where more komplikated shanges are possible.
GM will enkourage the removal of double letters, whish have always ben a deterent to akurate speling. Also, al wil agre that the horible mes of silent "e"'s in the languag is disgrasful, and they would go.
By the fourth year, peopl wil be reseptiv to steps sush as replasing "th" with "z" and "w" by "v".
During ze fifz year, ze unesesary "o" kan be droped from vords kontaining "o", and similar shanges vud of kors be aplid to ozer kombinations of leters.
After zis fifz yer, ve vil hav a reli sensibl riten styl. Zer vil be no mor trubls or difikultis, and employes vil find it ezi to kommunikat viz eash ozer.
Ov kors al supliers vil be expekted to us zis for all busines komunikation via GM.
Ze drem vil finali kum tru ….
Und efter ze fifz yer, ve vil al be speking German like zey vunted in ze forst plas.
If zis mad yu smil, plez pas on to oza pepl.

 

[uglyducking]

no

Directors at Opel and GM USA have announced an agreement to adopt English as the preferred language for communications, rather than German, which was another possibility.
As part of the negotiations, directors at GM conceded that English spelling has some room for improvement and have accepted a five-year phase-in plan.
In the first year, "s" will be used instead of the soft "c". Also, the hard "c" will be replased with "k". Not only will this klear up konfusion, but komputers have one less letter.
There will be growing kompany enthusiasm in the sekond year when the troublesome "ph" will be replased by "f". This will make words like "fotograf" 20 persent shorter.
In the third year, akseptanse of the new spelling kan be expekted to reash the stage where more komplikated shanges are possible.
GM will enkourage the removal of double letters, whish have always ben a deterent to akurate speling. Also, al wil agre that the horible mes of silent "e"'s in the languag is disgrasful, and they would go.
By the fourth year, peopl wil be reseptiv to steps sush as replasing "th" with "z" and "w" by "v".
During ze fifz year, ze unesesary "o" kan be droped from vords kontaining "o", and similar shanges vud of kors be aplid to ozer kombinations of leters.
After zis fifz yer, ve vil hav a reli sensibl riten styl. Zer vil be no mor trubls or difikultis, and employes vil find it ezi to kommunikat viz eash ozer.
Ov kors al supliers vil be expekted to us zis for all busines komunikation via GM.
Ze drem vil finali kum tru ….
Und efter ze fifz yer, ve vil al be speking German like zey vunted in ze forst plas.
If zis mad yu smil, plez pas on to oza pepl.

 

[ccc]

are you sure?
should a or an before elevator?
single t or double t in atic?

比我较真的人大有人在啊。哈