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不说音乐,单说歌词。一直有感觉,洋人的歌词糙。不精美。直。不委婉。野。什么都唱。

听到这首。音乐本身应该算是极品了。歌词更是完美。无论从洋人还是中文视角看。分享一回。我文学功底不深。不敏感。很少有歌词能让我直接叹服的。
 
不说音乐,单说歌词。一直有感觉,洋人的歌词糙。不精美。直。不委婉。野。什么都唱。

听到这首。音乐本身应该算是极品了。歌词更是完美。无论从洋人还是中文视角看。分享一回。我文学功底不深。不敏感。很少有歌词能让我直接叹服的。
It's dreamy weather we're on
You waved your crooked wand
Along an icy pond with a frozen moon
A murder of silhouette crows I saw
And the tears on my face
And the skates on the pond
They spell Alice

I disappear in your name
But you must wait for me
Somewhere across the sea
There's a wreck of a ship
Your hair is like meadow grass on the tide
And the raindrops on my window
And the ice in my drink
Baby all I can think of is Alice

Arithmetic arithmetock
Turn the hands back on the clock
How does the ocean rock the boat?
How did the razor find my throat?
The only strings that hold me here
Are tangled up around the pier

And so a secret kiss
Brings madness with the bliss
And I will think of this
When I'm dead in my grave
Set me adrift and I'm lost over there
And I must be insane
To go skating on your name
And by tracing it twice
I fell through the ice
Of Alice

And so a secret kiss
Brings madness with the bliss
And I will think of this
When I'm dead in my grave
Set me adrift and I'm lost over there
And I must be insane
To go skating on your name
And by tracing it twice
I fell through the ice
Of Alice
There's only Alice
 
It's dreamy weather we're on
You waved your crooked wand
Along an icy pond with a frozen moon
A murder of silhouette crows I saw
And the tears on my face
And the skates on the pond
They spell Alice

I disappear in your name
But you must wait for me
Somewhere across the sea
There's a wreck of a ship
Your hair is like meadow grass on the tide
And the raindrops on my window
And the ice in my drink
Baby all I can think of is Alice

Arithmetic arithmetock
Turn the hands back on the clock
How does the ocean rock the boat?
How did the razor find my throat?
The only strings that hold me here
Are tangled up around the pier

And so a secret kiss
Brings madness with the bliss
And I will think of this
When I'm dead in my grave
Set me adrift and I'm lost over there
And I must be insane
To go skating on your name
And by tracing it twice
I fell through the ice
Of Alice

And so a secret kiss
Brings madness with the bliss
And I will think of this
When I'm dead in my grave
Set me adrift and I'm lost over there
And I must be insane
To go skating on your name
And by tracing it twice
I fell through the ice
Of Alice
There's only Alice

"How does the ocean rock the boat?
How did the razor find my throat?
The only strings that hold me here
Are tangled up around the pier"...
歌词写的真棒,非常有诗意,谢谢分享。
 
When I'm dead in my grave
Set me adrift and I'm lost over there
And I must be insane
To go skating on your name
And by tracing it twice
I fell through the ice
Of Alice

镜头感太强了。这词直接就在脑子里变成电影镜头。
 
Tom waits的声音很有特点,音乐风格阴郁...
喜欢这个评论
“This song sounds like every movie about a man smoking at a bar, trying to drink his sorrows away, while it's raining outside”
 
你听他的Jersey Girl,那个词也是极品。
这个他唱的也好,BruceSprinsteen 翻唱的也出色。

这歌的美好,也是到了极点。我每每听这歌,都有回到当年的感觉。一点阴郁都没有,仿佛世界上一切美好都在那歌里。希望这歌一直唱下去的感觉。

把所有情绪都能写出唱出极致。

Tom waits的声音很有特点,音乐风格阴郁...
喜欢这个评论
“This song sounds like every movie about a man smoking at a bar, trying to drink his sorrows away, while it's raining outside”
 

一直很喜欢BruceSprinsteen的歌。


bruce 加了一段歌词,虽不能说浑然一体,但却别有风味。一下从女孩变成单亲妈妈的爱情。哈哈,tom也居然没有反对。因为总体上两人的版本都是一样的完美和真情流露。

I got no time for the corner boys
Down in the street makin' all that noise
All the girls out on the avenue
'Cause tonight I wanna be with you

Tonight Im gonna take that ride
Across the river to the Jersey side
Take my baby to the carnival
And Ill take her on all the rides

'Cause down the shore everythings alright
You and your baby on a Saturday night
And you know all my dreams come true
When Im walking down the street with you

Sing sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la, well, Im in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la

You know she thrills me with all her charms
When Im wrapped up in my babys arms
My little girl gives me everything
I know someday that shell wear my ring

So dont bother me man, I aint got no time
Im on my way to see that girl of mine
'Cause nothing matters in this whole wide world
When youre in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la, Im in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la

I see you on the street and you look so tired
Girl, I know that job you got leaves you so uninspired
When I come by to take you out to eat
Youre lyin all dressed up on the bed, baby, fast asleep

Go in the bathroom, put your makeup on
Were gonna take that little brat of yours
And drop her off at your moms
I know a place where the dancings free
Now baby, wont you come with me


'Cause down the shore everythings alright
You and your baby on a Saturday night
Nothing matters in this whole wide world, now girl, now, now
When youre in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la Im in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la
 
bruce 加了一段歌词,虽不能说浑然一体,但却别有风味。一下从女孩变成单亲妈妈的爱情。哈哈,tom也居然没有反对。因为总体上两人的版本都是一样的完美和真情流露。

I got no time for the corner boys
Down in the street makin' all that noise
All the girls out on the avenue
'Cause tonight I wanna be with you

Tonight Im gonna take that ride
Across the river to the Jersey side
Take my baby to the carnival
And Ill take her on all the rides

'Cause down the shore everythings alright
You and your baby on a Saturday night
And you know all my dreams come true
When Im walking down the street with you

Sing sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la, well, Im in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la

You know she thrills me with all her charms
When Im wrapped up in my babys arms
My little girl gives me everything
I know someday that shell wear my ring

So dont bother me man, I aint got no time
Im on my way to see that girl of mine
'Cause nothing matters in this whole wide world
When youre in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la, Im in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la

I see you on the street and you look so tired
Girl, I know that job you got leaves you so uninspired
When I come by to take you out to eat
Youre lyin all dressed up on the bed, baby, fast asleep

Go in the bathroom, put your makeup on
Were gonna take that little brat of yours
And drop her off at your moms
I know a place where the dancings free
Now baby, wont you come with me


'Cause down the shore everythings alright
You and your baby on a Saturday night
Nothing matters in this whole wide world, now girl, now, now
When youre in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la Im in love with a Jersey girl

Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la la la
Sha la la la la la la
Sha la la la
原来如此,太好玩了。
Tom Whites的版本很man
 
对比英文中文歌词, 英文的歌词还是过于直白. 这一点好坏不论. 单就场景感, 直白有时反而更直指人心.

另外就是, 很多好的英文词作里总是充斥着两个字





这一点是我比较欣赏的, 中文歌词中这两个字是否充分地运用, 也是我判断好词的标准之一. 这两个字扩展到现代文学诗歌领域也不失为极为重要的两个字吧? 大家意见如何?

BRUCE SPRINGSTEEN LYRICS

"I'm Goin' Down"

We sit in the car outside your house you're quiet
I can feel the heat coming 'round
I go to put my arm around you
And you give me a look like I'm way out of bounds
Well you let out one of your bored sighs
Well lately when I look into your eyes
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down

We get dressed up and we go out, baby, for the night
We come home early burning, burning in some fire fight
I'm sick and tired of you setting me up
Setting me up just to knock-a knock-a knock-a me down
Down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down

I pull you close now baby but when we kiss I can feel a doubt
I remember back when we started
My kisses used to turn you inside out
I used to drive you to work in the morning
Friday night I'd drive you all around
You used to love to drive me wild
But lately girl you get your kicks from just driving me down
 
对比英文中文歌词, 英文的歌词还是过于直白. 这一点好坏不论. 单就场景感, 直白有时反而更直指人心.

另外就是, 很多好的英文词作里总是充斥着两个字





这一点是我比较欣赏的, 中文歌词中这两个字是否充分地运用, 也是我判断好词的标准之一. 这两个字扩展到现代文学诗歌领域也不失为极为重要的两个字吧? 大家意见如何?

BRUCE SPRINGSTEEN LYRICS

"I'm Goin' Down"

We sit in the car outside your house you're quiet
I can feel the heat coming 'round
I go to put my arm around you
And you give me a look like I'm way out of bounds
Well you let out one of your bored sighs
Well lately when I look into your eyes
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down

We get dressed up and we go out, baby, for the night
We come home early burning, burning in some fire fight
I'm sick and tired of you setting me up
Setting me up just to knock-a knock-a knock-a me down
Down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down
I'm going down, down, down, down

I pull you close now baby but when we kiss I can feel a doubt
I remember back when we started
My kisses used to turn you inside out
I used to drive you to work in the morning
Friday night I'd drive you all around
You used to love to drive me wild
But lately girl you get your kicks from just driving me down
很有名的一首歌,旋律简单,不看歌词很难感觉出是一首sad song
 
最后编辑:
最喜欢的还是Bruce Springsteen叙事风格的歌,后期作品音乐性增强,配器丰富,有口琴solo,营造出深沉悲哀的情怀。
流行歌曲中将社会批判性和故事性融为一体,非常独特,绝对是大师级别。


《The ghost of Tom Joad》

Man walks along the railroad track
He's goin' some place, there's no turnin' back
The Highway Patrol chopper comin' up over the ridge
Man sleeps by a campfire under the bridge
The shelter line stretchin' around the corner
Welcome to the New World Order
Families sleepin' in their cars out in the Southwest
No job, no home, no peace, no rest, no rest

And the highway is alive tonight
Nobody's foolin' nobody is to where it goes
I'm sitting down here in the campfire light
Searchin' for the ghost of Tom Joad

He pulls his prayer book out of a sleepin' bag
The preacher lights up a butt and takes a drag
He's waitin' for the time when the last shall be first and the first shall be last
In a cardboard box 'neath the underpass
With a one way ticket to the promised land
With a hole in your belly and a gun in your hand
Lookin' for a pillow of solid rock
Bathin' in the cities' aqueducts

And the highway is alive tonight
Nobody's foolin' nobody is to where it goes
I'm sittin' down here in the campfire light
With the ghost of old Tom Joad

Solo

Now Tom Said; "Ma, whenever ya see a cop beatin' a guy
Wherever a hungry new born baby cries
Wherever there's a fight against the blood and hatred in the air
Look for me ma
I'll be there
Wherever somebody's srtugglin' for a place to stand
For a decent job or a helpin' hand
Wherever somebody is strugglin' to be free
Look in their eyes ma,
You'll see me

And the highway is alive tonight
Nobody's foolin' nobody is to where it goes
I'm sittin' down here in the campfire light
With the ghost of Tom Joad
 
最后编辑:
Bruce的深厚唱功支持他能够在优美旋律上支持复杂的口语化的叙事歌词. 这类歌词在folk里常见, 但在摇滚里, 不是很流行. 好像John Mellencamp 也有类似的叙事方式, 也是蓝领听众群.

Jack And Diane Lyrics

from The Best That I Could Do

Little ditty about Jack and Diane
2 American kids growin' up in the heartland
Jacky's gonna be a football star
Diane debutante backseat of Jacky's car

Suckin' on a chili dog outside the tastee freeze
Diane's sittin' on Jacky's lap, he's got his hands between her knees
Jacky say, "Hey Diane lets run off behind a shady tree
Dribble off those Bobby brooks, let me do what I please"
And say a

"Oh yeah life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone"
Say a, "Oh yeah life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone, they walk on"

Jacky sits back reflects his thoughts for the moment
Scratches his head and does his best James Dean
Well you know Diane, we gotta run of the city
Diane says "Baby, you ain't missing nothing
Jacky say a

"Oh yeah life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone
Oh yeah they say life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone"

Gonna let it roll 'n' rock
Let it roll
Let the Bible belt come on down
And save my soul
Hold on to 16 as long as you can
Changes come around real soon
Make us women and men

Oh yeah life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone
Oh yeah they say life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone

A little ditty about Jack and Diane
Two American kids doin' the best that they cant
 
Bruce的深厚唱功支持他能够在优美旋律上支持复杂的口语化的叙事歌词. 这类歌词在folk里常见, 但在摇滚里, 不是很流行. 好像John Mellencamp 也有类似的叙事方式, 也是蓝领听众群.

Jack And Diane Lyrics

from The Best That I Could Do

Little ditty about Jack and Diane
2 American kids growin' up in the heartland
Jacky's gonna be a football star
Diane debutante backseat of Jacky's car

Suckin' on a chili dog outside the tastee freeze
Diane's sittin' on Jacky's lap, he's got his hands between her knees
Jacky say, "Hey Diane lets run off behind a shady tree
Dribble off those Bobby brooks, let me do what I please"
And say a

"Oh yeah life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone"
Say a, "Oh yeah life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone, they walk on"

Jacky sits back reflects his thoughts for the moment
Scratches his head and does his best James Dean
Well you know Diane, we gotta run of the city
Diane says "Baby, you ain't missing nothing
Jacky say a

"Oh yeah life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone
Oh yeah they say life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone"

Gonna let it roll 'n' rock
Let it roll
Let the Bible belt come on down
And save my soul
Hold on to 16 as long as you can
Changes come around real soon
Make us women and men

Oh yeah life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone
Oh yeah they say life goes on
Long after the thrill of livin' is gone

A little ditty about Jack and Diane
Two American kids doin' the best that they cant
这首歌不好听...
微微嘶哑的嗓音,最有特色的还是Rod Steward,耳熟能详的歌也很多
 
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