精华 小学生诗文集

[shenzhou8]

Looping around the neck of a flower
Are supportive and gentle sepals
Like arms of a lover

His (Lover's) green palms
Of sepals
Gently cup her face
Of petals
The invisible eyes of air
Gaze into
The fleeting beauty's inner soul
Oh dear, my true

 

[cheerup]

(Just for a laugh. 不是接龙诗)

Because we asked


Annoyed by the dark cloud over me,
I asked why?
"Because you asked!"
A pour of rain followed

 

[cheerup]

His (Lover's) green palms
Of sepals
Gently cup her face
Of petals
The invisible eyes of air
Gaze into
The fleeting beauty's inner soul
Oh dear, my true

I like your use of "palms" and "cup" to describe sepals, like hands

 

[GuardianAngel]

Love your poems!

 

[cheerup]

Love your poems!

谢谢喜欢, 我们都是在这里玩儿, 最重要是隨意, 开心

 

[shenzhou8]

I like your use of "palms" and "cup" to describe sepals, like hands

Look at your own picture!

 

[青草地]

His (Lover's) green palms
Of sepals
Gently cup her face
Of petals
The invisible eyes of air
Gaze into
The fleeting beauty's inner soul
Oh dear, my true

Very beautiful!
接：

True me and a fake you
A combination of this real world
You is me, and vise-versa

 

[青草地]

(Just for a laugh. 不是接龙诗)

Because we asked


Annoyed by the dark cloud over me,
I asked why?
"Because you asked!"
A pour of rain followed

good angle


Holding rain, I sing
Ding-ding-dong-dong, guess who am I
A basin for you

 

[cheerup]

good angle


Holding rain, I sing
Ding-ding-dong-dong, guess who am I
A basin for you

Cheerfully I yell and jump into the basin
Thanks for your bathtub
Now close your eyes please

 

[shenzhou8]

(Just for a laugh. 不是接龙诗)

Because we asked


Annoyed by the dark cloud over me,
I asked why?
"Because you asked!"
A pour of rain followed

The cloud dark like a shadow
Follows me wherever I go
Why me? Loudly I complain
Down pours the rain
Aren't you glad you ask
In sunshine now you bask

 

[cheerup]

The cloud dark like a shadow
Follows me wherever I go
Why me? Loudly I complain
Down pours the rain
Aren't you glad you ask
In sunshine now you bask

Haha, thankyou for the "sunshine"

 

[shenzhou8]

Very beautiful!
接：

True me and a fake you
A combination of this real world
You is me, and vise-versa

多谢青师鼓励！这个vise versa不好接

Vise-versa, that is, me is you
For you is me
Together, we make up our world
Says who? The philosophical truth
Imaginary you is real me, vise-versa
Imaginary is real, vise-versa
Says who? The poetic truth

 

[cheerup]

接：
Truth is yielded to pleasing
Sentiment overcomes logics
When love clicks

 

[shenzhou8]

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Cloud
　
My beautiful face is
like a masterpiece of art.
But the tears can immerse a whole city.
　
My sunny smile
will cheer up your heart
But the anger can set up lighting fires.
　
And your cheer and sorrows
pass through me
Without carrying away a bit of cloud

对比得好！

Your face is gold radiating
Your smile melts my frozen lake
Your tears flood my city
Your anger sets ablaze my country
Yet my cheers slip through you silent
My sorrows bounce back sullen

 

[cheerup]

今晚月圓, 浪漫。来个写月的诗

Moon's romance

High in the sky
Opaque frost flowers
Mysterious dark chocolates
A full moon's romance!


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