精华 小学生诗文集

[cheerup]

Truly part of you

Like a white rose
That's endured the pain of turning green
Then becomes greens on your dining plate
To be truly part of you!

 

[shenzhou8]

Beauty will reach its climax when caterpillar has transformed into a beautiful butterfly that bursts open the pupa

图拍得真好，道也悟得巧。我跟玩一个，顺便还学了点昆虫学词语

Stillness Awaits Beauty （借光）

Oh a sweet breeze in a summer day
Chrysanthemums gently rock and sway
Fancy bustling efflorescence to come
Flutter butterflies and tiny bees hum

Beneath one leaf clings an encapsulated life
Fantasize metamorphosis into a butterfly
She flaps wings gracious and awesome
Over chrysanthemum blossoms

There stands a beauty gazing far
Into her dream adorned with stars
Her chrysanthemums of life flourishing
Her butterflies of life flapping gracious wings...

Oh a sweet breeze in a summer day
Chrysanthemums gently rock and sway
If stillness patiently awaits - beauty
Aye I dare say: beauty perpetuates serenity

 

[cheerup]

图拍得真好，道也悟得巧。我跟玩一个，顺便还学了点昆虫学词语

Stillness Awaits Beauty （借光）

Oh a sweet breeze in a summer day
Chrysanthemums gently rock and sway
Fancy a bustling efflorescence to come
Flutter butterflies and tiny bees hum

Beneath one leaf hangs an encapsulated life
Fantasize metamorphosis into a butterfly
She flaps wings gracious and awesome
Over chrysanthemum blossoms

There stands a beauty gazing far
Into her dream adorned with stars
Her chrysanthemums of life flourishing
Her butterflies of life flapping gracious wings...

Oh a sweet breeze in a summer day
Chrysanthemums gently rock and sway
If stillness patiently awaits - beauty
Aye I dare say: beauty'd choose serenity

很美的诗，首尾呼应，重复前二句增加诗歌感，聪明
進步神速啊

 

[shenzhou8]

很美的诗，首尾呼应，重复前二句增加诗歌感，聪明
進步神速啊

诗兄谬奖，再接再厉

 

[青草地]

Truely talented, both of you! Love those beautiful poetry souls. Keep writing and have a lot of fun.

 

[cheerup]

Truely talented, both of you! Love those beautiful poetry souls. Keep writing and have a lot of fun.

谢谢青草mm的提点和鼓励

送妳一诗
What a beauty!

An ordinary being
with everlasting beauty
As small as a young seed
Yet as big as an ocean

 

[cheerup]

诗兄谬奖，再接再厉

叫诗兄不敢当了, 互相学习倒是

 

[cheerup]

Sad!

Summer mosquitoes buzzing
with stings exposed
Too sad!
There's no more blood
no more space for you
Inside!

 

[cheerup]

A perfect moon on a calm lake
Until tears start to flow
from the fish's eyes,
a thousand miles away

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[shenzhou8]

谢谢青草mm的提点和鼓励

送妳一诗
What a beauty!

An ordinary being
with everlasting beauty
As small as a young seed
Yet as big as an ocean

多谢青草地mm鼓励！

Spark and Flutter

A spark
Of imagination
Can set ablaze
A prairie of letters

A butterfly's flutter
In the air of beauty
Can bring about
A tornado in heart

 

[cheerup]

多谢青草地mm鼓励！

Spark and Flutter

A spark
of imagination
can set ablaze
a prairie
of letters

The flutter of a butterfly
in the air of beauty
can cause
a tornado to break out
in heart

"set ablaze , tornado" your poem is getting very powerful now
Good try!
spark 对比 fire ;, flutter 对比 tornado 令诗生色不少, cool

 

[cheerup]

Whisper

A song in the moonlight,
from a nightingale.
So close and blue

A silent whisper,
always inside me.
But as far as eternity



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[cheerup]

An old violin

An old violin
Frayed strings, broken bow
Still quietly playing its most beautiful moments



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[shenzhou8]

"set ablaze , tornado" your poem is getting very powerful now
Good try!
spark 对比 fire ;, flutter 对比 tornado 令诗生色不少, cool

再借光！

 

[shenzhou8]

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A perfect moon on a calm lake
Until tears start to flow
from the fish's eyes,
away

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When fish cry, to the lake tears roll, a thousand miles.

REFLECTION

Above the tranquil lake
The round moon contemplates
Darkness of speck, brightness of light
Ah imperfect yet full, this is life

The wind a naughty cat sneaks by
Tickle the sober lake to giggles
The image twisted by one thousand winking ripples
Reflection is now over, she sighs