村长几次发帖提到要有大智慧处理这事, 村长说的大智慧到底是什么?

老实说我不觉得是这里长大的孩子写的,尤其是第一篇
老实说我也很吃惊那是这里长大的孩子并且是学文科选择走从政道路的人写的。但是这种怀疑有什么意义呢?老大已经说了是他译的,我就觉得没必要把事情往复杂处想。
 
第二篇在哪里呢?刚读了第一篇
[Update - March 25, 2014]

With the generous support from kind-hearted individuals from across Canada, we have far surpassed our original fundraising goals and expectations. Not only will these donations help pay for funeral expenses of Mr. Yue Liu, they will help support the Liu family in the long run. These donations exemplify the strength and resolve of the community that surrounds the Liu family as they mourn the loss of a loving father, caring husband, and proud son.

At this time, we have decided to not hold further fundraising events and focus our efforts on organizing the funeral arrangements. We will keep the website running and accept donations until the funeral and ensure all collected donations are given directly to the Liu family.

If you have any concerns or comments in regards to the donations, please call 613-762-0420.

Again, with our deepest gratitude, we thank you for the support you have provided the Liu family when they needed it the most.

Fundraising Committee for Fanyan Bu and the Liu Family

March 25, 2014
 
[Update - March 25, 2014]

With the generous support from kind-hearted individuals from across Canada, we have far surpassed our original fundraising goals and expectations. Not only will these donations help pay for funeral expenses of Mr. Yue Liu, they will help support the Liu family in the long run. These donations exemplify the strength and resolve of the community that surrounds the Liu family as they mourn the loss of a loving father, caring husband, and proud son.

At this time, we have decided to not hold further fundraising events and focus our efforts on organizing the funeral arrangements. We will keep the website running and accept donations until the funeral and ensure all collected donations are given directly to the Liu family.

If you have any concerns or comments in regards to the donations, please call 613-762-0420.

Again, with our deepest gratitude, we thank you for the support you have provided the Liu family when they needed it the most.

Fundraising Committee for Fanyan Bu and the Liu Family

March 25, 2014
这个比前一个短多了,相对也容易写,看不出是两人写的
 
BTW一点红把她发的贴子删了呀,有点意思
 
我的文笔也就这水平了, 我贬低自己好了:tx:
唉,我这人心好,看不得别人自虐,来给你揉揉:tx:
不过你觉得第二篇的文笔就达标了吗?
 
这个比前一个短多了,相对也容易写,看不出是两人写的

至少没有明显的文法错误。
 
唉,我这人心好,看不得别人自虐,来给你揉揉:tx:
不过你觉得第二篇的文笔就达标了吗?

我又到他自己的网站上看了看, 好像是差不多。
 
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